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Jester Lapse 07-30-2013 08:44 PM

You have light sources contradicting each other.
The shoes and pants lack any actual dimension with their shading.
The belt doesn't look like a belt, but merely the upper part of the pants.
Dithering isn't very Delt styled.
The swords seem to slant at the top.

Overall a nice piece, just minor errors that could easily be fixed.

Shiz 07-30-2013 08:47 PM

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Posted by Jester Lapse (Post 394179)
You have light sources contradicting each other.
The shoes and pants lack any actual dimension with their shading.
The belt doesn't look like a belt, but merely the upper part of the pants.
Dithering isn't very Delt styled.
The swords seem to slant at the top.

Overall a nice piece, just minor errors that could easily be fixed.

There is dithering in Zerith's piece, only reason why I threw it in.
Swords are slant at top.
Belt hates me.
Probably I had the most trouble with eas the pants.. I hate those.. thanks for the feedback man, I'll look out for these in the future. :)

Kay9 07-30-2013 08:48 PM

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Posted by ShizGodsu (Post 394178)
If you didn't notice, almost all of Delteria is half pillow shaded. :P Otherwise I wouldnt pillow shade

I have noticed pillowshading. Some pillowshading. But that doesn't determine the way you should make all things that are related to delteria.

Shiz 07-30-2013 08:52 PM

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Posted by Kay9 (Post 394182)
I have noticed pillowshading. Some pillowshading. But that doesn't determine the way you should make all things that are related to delteria.

Actually, this is the only thing related to Delteria. requested by Shurikan (Delteria GFX Admin). I used Zerith's references of his creatures and his alligators consist of pillow shading as well. Maybe you should go back a few pages on my thread and examine my other pieces of work. I'll guarantee you that there isn't pillow shading.

Kay9 07-30-2013 09:05 PM

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Posted by ShizGodsu (Post 394183)
I'll guarantee you that there isn't pillow shading.

Ah I see. Still delteria is not all about pillowshading if you look at the other things made. I guarantee there is pillowshading :p

Shiz 07-30-2013 09:09 PM

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Posted by Kay9 (Post 394185)
Ah I see. Still delteria is not all about pillowshading if you look at the other things made. I guarantee there is pillowshading :p

Half of those are Delteria related. As I said again, The crocodile is based off of Zerith's and his as well contains pillow shading which is why, for the third time, I used it. Please get off my thread if you're going to continue to argue, thanks.

Kay9 07-30-2013 09:22 PM

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Posted by ShizGodsu (Post 394187)
Please get off my thread if you're going to continue to argue, thanks.

woah. You gave me a guarantee bratha. We are just having a simple discussion on pillowshading and delteria. I Have actually learned a lot thus far :P

Shiz 07-30-2013 09:24 PM

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Posted by Kay9 (Post 394192)
woah. You gave me a guarantee bratha. We are just having a simple discussion on pillowshading and delteria. I Have actually learned a lot thus far :P

Glad you're learning a lot since you ar'nt a "GFX guy". But next time please go check a lot of Delteria's work and examine it before saying something is incorrect. I wouldn't want my thread getting into a flame.

www.delteria.net

Shiz 07-31-2013 10:57 AM

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Random guy I felt like making for Delteria haha.

I may give him hair later! :)

Ryan 07-31-2013 01:26 PM

Have you made a Corn cob melee yet? Because I would lol (look at le title)

Shiz 07-31-2013 01:28 PM

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Posted by Ryan (Post 394414)
Have you made a Corn cob melee yet? Because I would lol (look at le title)

haw haw. lol. I might make one when I'm really bored xD

PumaD 07-31-2013 05:03 PM

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Posted by Krunel (Post 393983)
I never knew zone had a style.. whats their style like?

trash

Shiz 07-31-2013 07:27 PM

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dfsff

ran out of ideas lately, this is what I came up with.

Jester Lapse 07-31-2013 09:41 PM

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Posted by PumaD (Post 394481)
trash

Mattkann is gunna rep you for that, just a fair warning.

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Posted by ShizGodsu (Post 394523)
dfsff

ran out of ideas lately, this is what I came up with.

You should try something new. So far all you really have done are melee's and NPC's. Try and push yourself creatively. Perhaps a new concept for a new baddy?

Shiz 07-31-2013 09:42 PM

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Posted by Jester Lapse (Post 394605)
Mattkann is gunna rep you for that, just a fair warning.



You should try something new. So far all you really have done are melee's and NPC's. Try and push yourself creatively. Perhaps a new concept for a new baddy?

Good idea. I just love making NPC's haha.

I'll see what I come up with.

PumaD 08-01-2013 12:48 AM

I got a rep+ ya, but it was not kattMan the MattKan. However, I think Delterias non player Characters are getting bored really fast, as Jester said try to make something else........ maybe some plants/trees? Or monsters would be nice, too.

Shiz 08-01-2013 12:52 AM

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Posted by PumaD (Post 394687)
I got a rep+ ya, but it was not kattMan the MattKan. However, I think Delterias non player Characters are getting bored really fast, as Jester said try to make something else........ maybe some plants/trees? Or monsters would be nice, too.

I was thinking more on the monster side :-). Trees/ nature stuff doesn't interest me.

PumaD 08-01-2013 12:57 AM

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Posted by ShizGodsu (Post 394690)
I was thinking more on the monster side :-). Trees/ nature stuff doesn't interest me.

They will interest you once I tell you to make some. (joking, I would consider doing them myself even the crap I do will be better than yours.)

(joking)

Go ahead and do some monsters, can't wait to see them.

Trakan 08-01-2013 03:57 AM

SWAG

MysticalDragon 08-01-2013 04:42 AM

I like your art, welcome to the team!

Shiz 08-01-2013 05:03 AM

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Posted by MysticalDragon (Post 394747)
I like your art, welcome to the team!

Thanks! :D

Shiz 08-02-2013 01:19 PM

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Something made for fun :D

kenthefruit 08-02-2013 01:41 PM

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Posted by ShizGodsu (Post 395347)
Something made for fun :D

I really like this :0

Shiz 08-02-2013 01:57 PM

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Posted by TwistedWizard (Post 395359)
I really like this :0

Thank you<3

KT3 08-02-2013 05:00 PM

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Posted by ShizGodsu (Post 395347)
Something made for fun :D

Nice

Shiz 08-02-2013 09:31 PM

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Posted by KT3 (Post 395432)
Nice

Thank you haha.

Ozzy_Magus 08-04-2013 09:25 AM

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Posted by ShizGodsu (Post 395347)
Something made for fun :D

Should do more of these, they look nice

Shiz 08-04-2013 09:46 AM

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Posted by Ozzy_Magus (Post 396217)
Should do more of these, they look nice

I know right? I love how it turned out, I just started some where and t ended up like that. Looks pree cool :D

Shiz 08-06-2013 07:42 PM

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Personal melee!

kenthefruit 08-06-2013 09:58 PM

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Posted by ShizGodsu (Post 397165)
Personal melee!

The swirling effect looks awkward on a blade that's supposed to be sharp. Maybe turn them sharp instead swirly.

Shiz 08-06-2013 11:29 PM

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Posted by TwistedWizard (Post 397199)
The swirling effect looks awkward on a blade that's supposed to be sharp. Maybe turn them sharp instead swirly.

Thereis no swirling effect. Check again. If you are referring to the blue in the middle, that is not a swirl. That is just a design which is in most of my blades.

kenthefruit 08-07-2013 12:21 AM

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Posted by ShizGodsu (Post 397222)
Thereis no swirling effect. Check again. If you are referring to the blue in the middle, that is not a swirl. That is just a design which is in most of my blades.

No i meant the blade itself, on the sides it goes swirly.

Sir 08-07-2013 02:00 AM

Something based off of this: http://i52.tinypic.com/2cpdikh.png would be cool =]

kenthefruit 08-07-2013 04:59 AM

Along the side of what I was thinking.
http://i1275.photobucket.com/albums/...ps8a65e8ee.png

Shiz 08-07-2013 05:25 AM

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Posted by TwistedWizard (Post 397238)
No i meant the blade itself, on the sides it goes swirly.

Just how the blade was designed is all. Haha.

Shiz 08-09-2013 01:07 PM

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Spar mask I just made :]

*Rose 08-09-2013 10:59 PM

try making it a bit thicker, that way people can really notice te light source. Good job!

Shiz 08-10-2013 08:40 PM

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Re-made the mask..


A little something I shaded too. 99% did the outline! you so sexc at line-art <3

Shiz 08-11-2013 08:06 PM

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Finished the mask

99% 08-11-2013 10:40 PM

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Posted by ShizGodsu (Post 398732)
Finished the mask

Erm. There's a name missing from that peice noob.

Shiz 08-11-2013 11:10 PM

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Posted by ShizGodsu (Post 398453)
Re-made the mask..


A little something I shaded too. 99% did the outline! you so sexc at line-art <3

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Posted by 99% (Post 398787)
Erm. There's a name missing from that peice noob.

ez.

Trakan 08-12-2013 06:37 AM

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Posted by 99% (Post 398787)
Erm. There's a name missing from that peice noob.

noob

Shiz 08-13-2013 08:30 PM

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Lil' something I made for iEra.

Shiz 08-24-2013 08:04 PM

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Here's a gas mask I just started! (15 min)

Something off if you ask me. It's supposed to be a full faced mask, so it'll look big haha. I am going to redo the sides since I don't like how it turned out.

Platinum 08-24-2013 10:21 PM

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Posted by ShizGodsu (Post 403203)
Here's a gas mask I just started! (15 min)

Something off if you ask me. It's supposed to be a full faced mask, so it'll look big haha. I am going to redo the sides since I don't like how it turned out.

It's probably my brightness setting but it looks like a black blob. No offence.

Shiz 08-25-2013 12:07 AM

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Posted by Platinum (Post 403253)
It's probably my brightness setting but it looks like a black blob. No offence.

It's supposed to be big. It has it's shaded areas. (You can tell the brightness and dull areas) As stated before, sides are a bit off. Which I'm guessing makes your brain refer to it as a blob lol.

Platinum 08-25-2013 12:33 AM

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Posted by ShizGodsu (Post 403307)
It's supposed to be big. It has it's shaded areas. (You can tell the brightness and dull areas) As stated before, sides are a bit off. Which I'm guessing makes your brain refer to it as a blob lol.

I turned the brightness up. It looks A LOT better than how I originally saw it lol (I'm on iPad and the brightness was fully down). I like it :3

Motrox 08-25-2013 12:42 AM

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Posted by ShizGodsu (Post 403203)
Here's a gas mask I just started! (15 min)

Something off if you ask me. It's supposed to be a full faced mask, so it'll look big haha. I am going to redo the sides since I don't like how it turned out.

There is some pillowing going on the visor. Also the shape is really jagged. Here's a quick edit on how you should shade it.

Shiz 08-25-2013 08:10 AM

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Posted by Motrox (Post 403321)
There is some pillowing going on the visor. Also the shape is really jagged. Here's a quick edit on how you should shade it.

I didn't feeli would have to point it out.

Looks good.

Shiz 09-28-2013 09:18 PM

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Wot. Just a gas mask.


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