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Kiwi 02-19-2013 09:29 PM

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Posted by Hadi (Post 300517)
I need help with this polar bear mount. Any suggestions?

I think the polar bear needs to be bigger, and legs need to be wider. It looks sort of like it bred with a mouse at the moment. :P

Jester Lapse 02-19-2013 09:37 PM

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Posted by Hadi (Post 300517)
I need help with this polar bear mount. Any suggestions?
http://i.imgur.com/IAlfqjC.png

It looks like a wiener dog.
http://montanasbestjerky.com/wp-cont...&a=b&cc=ffffff

one thing to keep in mind about bears is that they usually have a tummy,
http://i.imgur.com/HuDlY.png
yay for old pic as example, but you can see how the difference in line art actually makes it start to resemble the animal it is supposed to be. Also, I think your head shape plays a role in the awk looking too.

Jester Lapse 02-20-2013 12:03 AM

http://i.imgur.com/Oj8rIcf.pnghttp://i.imgur.com/q2liJkV.png

got bored, feedback welcomed. Used a ref pic, but I dunno how I like it. Supposed to be a fancy hat with a curl on the brim.

Lord* 02-20-2013 03:08 AM

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Posted by iDylan (Post 300679)
A hat you edited*.

Actually i made that from scratch, i have multiple saves of the unfinished project to prove it. If prefer if you thought about your replies and checked to see if their right.

Keeluah 02-20-2013 05:06 AM

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Made a tiger hat but I don't really like the back view, mind giving some feedback or help?

iDylan 02-20-2013 11:24 PM

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Posted by Lord* (Post 300858)
Actually i made that from scratch, i have multiple saves of the unfinished project to prove it. If prefer if you thought about your replies and checked to see if their right.

Looks like an exact copy of one of the GST hats that was used on iclassic.

MrSimons 02-21-2013 01:36 AM

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Posted by Hadi (Post 300517)
I need help with this polar bear mount. Any suggestions?
http://i.imgur.com/IAlfqjC.png

It looks pretty tiny

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Posted by iDylan (Post 301125)
Looks like an exact copy of one of the GST hats that was used on iclassic.

It looks like the hat sold in the castle shop.

Lord* 02-21-2013 02:54 AM

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Ill include images of the unfinished project.
1. First outline of front view
2. Started side view
3. Widened front view
4.Fiddeled around with back view
5.Finished product
Sorry if this was confusing, I now realize most hoods would look a lot alike considering that its a hood and their isn't a lot of options for how you could make one.

LavaClaw 02-21-2013 04:05 AM

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Posted by Lord* (Post 301173)
Ill include images of the unfinished project.
1. First outline of front view
2. Started side view
3. Widened front view
4.Fiddeled around with back view
5.Finished product
Sorry if this was confusing, I now realize most hoods would look a lot alike considering that its a hood and their isn't a lot of options for how you could make one.

that isn't exactly a step-by step process, it's just you putting the hat on a template and removing, adding and resizing a few sprites. I'm not accusing you of stealing but your 'proof' doesn't count for much

MrSimons 02-21-2013 04:08 AM

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Posted by Lord* (Post 301173)
Ill include images of the unfinished project.
1. First outline of front view
2. Started side view
3. Widened front view
4.Fiddeled around with back view
5.Finished product
Sorry if this was confusing, I now realize most hoods would look a lot alike considering that its a hood and their isn't a lot of options for how you could make one.

I just checked out the hood in the castle shop, and realized they look nothing alike, sorry for acusing you... .-.

Hadi 02-21-2013 08:58 PM

Thanks for the feedback guys, I wont be fixing it anymore because it was just a thing i made because i was bored =P

Envi 02-23-2013 06:40 AM

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Tell me your feedback. Its an evil stuffed bunny if you were wondering

FeedBack please

Hadi 02-23-2013 09:08 AM

http://i.imgur.com/GV9Nl20.png

V. 02-23-2013 10:44 AM

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Ooh that's good. I like the blade.
The car isn't finished, as you can see.
Attachment 9421

I need some help with the turtle, it doesn't look right.
Attachment 9422

I'm not sure how much space I need, so I left the image borders alone.

99% 02-23-2013 04:04 PM

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Posted by V. (Post 302215)
The car isn't finished, as you can see.
Attachment 9421

Nice work! Wish I had you working on Demonium. Lol.
Try silver toning the bumper a bit more, and rounding off the front of the car.
That little window panel is awkward. Try expanding out the front windshield and side windows, until that little middle panel is gone. It will be easier when you round the car off. :)


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