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Striken 02-14-2017 09:25 PM

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Posted by ihermes (Post 764816)
http://puu.sh/u3jtL/0cb0fa64dc.png what i got so far
pandas ftw!

dat ass

Yami 02-14-2017 09:33 PM

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Posted by ihermes (Post 764816)
http://puu.sh/u3jtL/0cb0fa64dc.png what i got so far
pandas ftw!

i love this but more as the art itself and not a state

Hadi 02-14-2017 09:58 PM

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Posted by ihermes (Post 764816)
http://puu.sh/u3jtL/0cb0fa64dc.png what i got so far
pandas ftw!

that looks awesome

slyde 02-14-2017 10:03 PM

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Posted by Bryan* (Post 764804)
Jeffrey will be so proud

lol Yeah, thought of his character when I went through the Graal Fire Department.

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Posted by The Dark Roxas (Post 764805)
Try and give the whole kind of sign a sorta "shine" stripe(s) and maybe have the fireman hat cast a shadow over the face? Or shade some depth into it, it's looking too plain right now, but I love love the message states they are smexy

[edit]
Also you could maybe try not using black inside the fireman hat, the black kind of takes away from it

Thanks for the suggestion. Yeah it looked so plain after seeing it. So I added your suggestions; it looks way better.

http://i.imgur.com/YTtwvVQ.png

Aguzo 02-14-2017 10:06 PM

So far, any tips? Not even sure if this is allowed. I want to make it a gif with the star dimming when it's half a heart.
http://i.imgur.com/RySkGsh.png

Maybe the shape is off a little? Not sure if I should remove the highlight at the top, or add more of them.

The Dark Roxas 02-14-2017 10:10 PM

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Posted by slyde (Post 764826)
lol Yeah, thought of his character when I went through the Graal Fire Department.



Thanks for the suggestion. Yeah it looked so plain after seeing it. So I added your suggestions; it looks way better.

http://i.imgur.com/YTtwvVQ.png

Very nice! I'm liking it :)

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TWIZ 02-14-2017 11:11 PM

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Posted by ihermes (Post 764816)
http://puu.sh/u3jtL/0cb0fa64dc.png what i got so far
pandas ftw!

cri :'(:'(:'(

Brick 02-15-2017 01:31 AM

http://i.imgur.com/EJMzOfs.png

This is my first time experimenting with pixel art so I need some serious feedback. Obviously it's not done yet, but how can I improve on what I already have? Also for the half-heart should I have a bomb explosion or the about-to-explode, flashing red bomb? I'm not sure if I'm skilled enough to make an explosion lol. Feedback appreciated.

Soul GFX 02-15-2017 01:48 AM

Oh wow :o

Striken 02-15-2017 02:04 AM

http://i.imgur.com/oMxXMIH.png

mithos 02-15-2017 02:31 AM

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Posted by Striken (Post 764889)

I like this, but I think the half heart state should have the gem cracked in half completely to make it more noticeable. Other then that, I enjoy how this looks, could maybe make the message bubbles more interesting though.

Striken 02-15-2017 02:35 AM

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Posted by mithos (Post 764900)
I like this, but I think the half heart state should have the gem cracked in half completely to make it more noticeable. Other then that, I enjoy how this looks, could maybe make the message bubbles more interesting though.

I've attempted about 7 different versions for the crack, and this one fit perfectly for me as the other versions I most likely am not experienced with so they didn't turn out too well. As for the bubbles I'll probably change it if I can find something much smoother and simplistic but matching the luxurious theme I have with the hearts.

TeK 02-15-2017 03:25 AM

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Posted by mithos (Post 764900)
I like this, but I think the half heart state should have the gem cracked in half completely to make it more noticeable. Other then that, I enjoy how this looks, could maybe make the message bubbles more interesting though.

Agreed that it may not be easily noticable. I'd buy it if it were, and it'd probably be my favorite. I love the shininess.

Ethacon 02-15-2017 03:28 AM

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Posted by Brick (Post 764866)
http://i.imgur.com/EJMzOfs.png

This is my first time experimenting with pixel art so I need some serious feedback. Obviously it's not done yet, but how can I improve on what I already have? Also for the half-heart should I have a bomb explosion or the about-to-explode, flashing red bomb? I'm not sure if I'm skilled enough to make an explosion lol. Feedback appreciated.

Lol I request an about to explode and you would understand this if you'll you saw one of my posts.

Striken 02-15-2017 03:30 AM

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Posted by TeK (Post 764939)
Agreed that it may not be easily noticable. I'd buy it if it were, and it'd probably be my favorite. I love the shininess.

Would it be better if I had the top half cracked?

small quick edit to show what I mean http://i.imgur.com/zQqLBYF.png


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