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Infernus Lapse 02-03-2013 04:42 PM

Infernus' creations!
 
Hey guys, most of you may know I'm not really an artist- cause i suck at it, but heres some of my creations. Ill post my creations every thursday at first, first will be the actual sketch then later the final colored version. My first one is a Keyblade, at first i posted it on the khinsider forums, but he community there is horrible for artists and such. So heres my first sketch, colored version should be out by later today or late tomorrow since this was from last thursday.


http://i.imgur.com/1AONVGR.jpg

I named it OdeKeeper, a play on words from the Keyblade "oath keeper" from kingdom hearts 2. The composition of it is:
Keychain- skull candy logo
Chain- headphone chord
Hilt/handle- COBY CD Player from the 90's
Blade- guitar riff (or whatever its called, i forgot)
Teeth- musical notes
Wrote the name on the bottom so the letters look like musical instruments.
Fairly simple concept, but I'm pretty proud. No shading since this is the first draft of it, enjoy! Feedback is highly appreciated.

maystro 02-03-2013 04:47 PM

use a ruler?

Infernus Lapse 02-03-2013 04:51 PM

Forgot to mention i made it freehand DX

But yeah your right, ill use a ruler next time

Kiwi 02-03-2013 09:25 PM

It's creative :P

Infernus Lapse 02-04-2013 01:27 AM

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Posted by Kiwi (Post 292373)
It's creative :P

Thanks bro :D

Probably wont get to coloring it today guys, I'm really tired. Good news: ill work on it tomorrow night after i get my homework done for sure. Thanks for the feedback guys, keep it up!

TheRuckus 02-04-2013 07:28 PM

http://i1309.photobucket.com/albums/...ps591e2508.png

Kiko 02-04-2013 07:32 PM

^
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Infernus Lapse 02-04-2013 09:10 PM

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Posted by TheRuckus (Post 292936)

.-. Thanks?

Whitewolf 02-05-2013 01:23 AM

As the image says "Its something" seems to me that your drawings just plain out suck. You should either take an art class or reconsider your priorities.

Infernus Lapse 02-05-2013 02:01 AM

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Posted by Whitewolf (Post 293155)
As the image says "Its something" seems to me that your drawings just plain out suck. You should either take an art class or reconsider your priorities.

Can you at least try to be nice about something? -.-

Remorse 02-05-2013 02:15 AM

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Posted by Infernus Lapse (Post 293190)
Can you at least try to be nice about something? -.-

well, the art world is pretty harsh.
It's somewhat creative but yeah...

Infernus Lapse 02-05-2013 02:21 AM

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Posted by Remorse (Post 293202)
well, the art world is pretty harsh.
It's somewhat creative but yeah...

I know, it sucked, its one of my first in a while. But honestly, hes been going around being a jerk on multiple threads after just joining, hes showing no maturity whatsoever and is just putting people down. Im not trying to be all "i made it so its amazing" no. Im just saying at least give me some advice to build on rather than sying i suck and to look at other hobbies, Seriously.


Ill post the digital version i colored as a draft, even though it may suck more, i couldnt find the colors i needed today. Sorry guys.

Original draft (it sucks more, i know) :

http://i.imgur.com/leim1eH.jpg

Remorse 02-05-2013 02:27 AM


Try expanding this portion of it and straighten out some lines

Infernus Lapse 02-05-2013 02:31 AM

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Posted by Remorse (Post 293213)

Try expanding this portion of it and straighten out some lines

Thanks :P ill see if i can do it. This thursday ill work on fixing odekeeper and ill work on a new drawing maybe, im running a bit short on ideas, as i dont want to fill the thread with 500 different crappy keyblade drawings, cause itll probably get annoying after a while.

I also didnt want these to go to waste, but i randomly decided to make two cold war themed keyblades for some reason, and honestly i cant stop laughing at it. Especially the teeth of the first one, with the two eyes poking out XD . Idk it just looks really stupid, except some parts of it like the flame of the torch, im proud of that part.

My random and really stupid looking cold war keyblades:

http://i.imgur.com/9Uh9HMq.jpg

Those are my last two keyblades for a while, now im going to be working on some buildings and landscapes to kinda get better at just basic drawing.

Ven 02-05-2013 04:14 AM

coo-ehl

Ozzy Magus 02-05-2013 06:11 PM

Don't say it sucks.
Just keep practicing.

Infernus Lapse 02-06-2013 04:16 AM

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Posted by Ozzy Magus (Post 293622)
Don't say it sucks.
Just keep practicing.

Thank you.
I intend to keep on practicing art, it'll come back to me after a bit. Ive always had a bit of a passion for it, but a combination of lowered self esteem and being up to my face in work keeps me from practicing.

TheNewMattZerch 02-06-2013 04:30 AM

Like it, it's better then anything I can draw.

Infernus Lapse 02-07-2013 11:24 PM

Mde a sketch of a new drawing, used a ruler like reuqested, but i did some parts freehand since they were too small or it was made towards the end of when the art room was available and i had to finish sooner. Ill post the drawing tonight!

Infernus Lapse 02-09-2013 03:38 AM

Alright guys, sorry for the delay. Without further wait, heres this weeks drawing. I made quite a bit of it with a ruler, but some of it i had to do freehand, mostly because im too lazy to find something that shape. Honestly, the worst part of it to me is the clock itself, i feel i could improve on that a bit more, which i probably will this weekend.

http://i.imgur.com/3Ytx0Jg.jpg?1

Remorse 02-09-2013 03:55 AM

plain and simple. not bad

DragonRider 02-09-2013 04:32 AM

http://i.imgur.com/wfDIPvQ.gif

Sup3rn00b 02-09-2013 04:35 AM

Try making a Sup3r villi4n for sup3rn00b

Yephenpeace 02-09-2013 07:12 AM

I thought the first drawing was a banjo. The clock tower is pretty nice though.

If you take your time drawing something, you shouldn't need a ruler to make an edge. You can, but I think it's far more convenient to just take your time and keep a steady hand. I don't have much to critique on the the actual drawings though. Keep it up!

WizaRD 02-09-2013 04:34 PM

wait, are you serious? is this what u drawed? well, what can i say...

lol iyts what i drawed at 7 years old, lmfao. but i don't want to be an assh0l3, so i'll just say 'not everyone is perfect, not everyone is like me'.

well, that makes me look like the biggest ahole, sh!tz

Infernus Lapse 02-10-2013 08:00 PM

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Posted by WizaRD (Post 295808)
wait, are you serious? is this what u drawed? well, what can i say...

lol iyts what i drawed at 7 years old, lmfao. but i don't want to be an assh0l3, so i'll just say 'not everyone is perfect, not everyone is like me'.

well, that makes me look like the biggest ahole, sh!tz

I had your grammar and spelling skill at age 5, so i think we're even ^.^

Infernus Lapse 02-13-2013 09:43 PM

For my final posting this week, this is my crest. It represents me and who i am. All ill explain is that the top left corner of the shield is a controller inside the kingdom hearts logo, which has my keyblade going through it. The bottom left is the logos of my favorite bands, Linkin Park, RiseAgainst, CageTheElephant, The OffSpring, and Modest Mouse. The rest i will not explain at all. Also a new thing, i wont respond to super negative feedback or stupid trolls anymore, i dont have time for that. Heres the image, if you want a response leave positive and helpful feedback please, its sad that i have to tell you that.

http://i.imgur.com/u6RgfKw.jpg?2

DragonRider 02-14-2013 01:53 AM

The jewel in the hilt is off-center and the middle is too crowded and off-topic. Try to make it relate to each other and blend in better with the background? And the two blades are not symmetrical and are too far apart and the handle isn't symmetrical and the colors are a bit hard to see.

Infernus Lapse 02-27-2013 12:49 AM

Alright guys, thanks for the feedback. Since i didn't post one last week, I'm going to post my draft of my new KeyBlade this time then on thursday ill post a shaded version. So heres the one I'm working on, tons of people have tried making Zelda Keyblades but I'm not sure if anyones attempted this. Again, this is a DRAFT, not a final version, so don't expect it to look super professional and crap, its being worked on. Im beginning to work on correcting my flaws in the other drawings, those will be posted as soon as i get to those as well.

1st draft of my Zelda Keyblade:

http://i.imgur.com/nNkdfHS.jpg?1

Remorse 02-27-2013 01:10 AM

It's pretty good.
could use some detailing though

Infernus Lapse 02-28-2013 12:13 AM

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Posted by Remorse (Post 304144)
It's pretty good.
could use some detailing though

Im planning to give those touches on the final product, which i will be done with once i get back ahead in school.

Myst 02-28-2013 09:22 AM

all this plain out sucks, keep trying i believe in you!

Infernus Lapse 02-28-2013 01:09 PM

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Posted by Myst (Post 304956)
all this plain out sucks, keep trying i believe in you!

I cant help but agree that my art sucks, its more ugly than Megan Fox's thumbs. Thanks :P

Infernus Lapse 03-21-2013 10:14 PM

Apologies for the HUGE bump, i don't wanna make 5 threads for one topic. After my little hiatus of not making art, I'm coming back with this, Red's Cap from FireRed, Leaf Green, and all his other cameo's in future games. Despite it being ass quality, It's my best work. Here it is:

http://i.imgur.com/WMQo9fL.jpg

Jester Lapse 03-21-2013 10:23 PM

Shading would help your art immensely

Infernus Lapse 03-22-2013 12:48 AM

Shading isnt my strong suit, im still practicing XD

Sup3rn00b 03-22-2013 01:01 AM

I think that there's a great artist inside of you that's slowly making its way out.

Infernus Lapse 03-22-2013 06:14 AM

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Posted by Sup3rn00b (Post 315896)
I think that there's a great artist inside of you that's slowly making its way out.

Thanks! *gives cookie*

DragonRider 03-22-2013 07:01 AM

Too 2D

MonicaLewinsky 03-22-2013 03:44 PM

Quote:

Posted by Whitewolf (Post 293155)
As the image says "Its something" seems to me that your drawings just plain out suck. You should either take an art class or reconsider your priorities.

Creates a forums account, 9 posts and he already feels as if he has the right to bash people.

Infernus Lapse 03-22-2013 10:49 PM

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Posted by DragonRider (Post 316099)
Too 2D

3D for hats, especially Red's, requires shading, which i am currently working on.

AgentBaby 03-24-2013 05:04 PM

Rocket looks like a ***** on Green Mindeds :3

Sup3rn00b 03-26-2013 01:41 AM

Draw your favorite pokemon for practice, like me.

Infernus Lapse 03-26-2013 01:51 AM

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Posted by Sup3rn00b (Post 318268)
Draw your favorite pokemon for practice, like me.

That reminds me, i drew a squirtle and wartortle. I made these a couple weeks ago, so ive had quite a bit of practice since these. Here you are:

Squirtle:
http://i.imgur.com/dzZDmAU.jpg

Wartortle:
http://i.imgur.com/r5ZkrNV.jpg?1

Sup3rn00b 03-26-2013 01:58 AM

How about starting with smaller drawings? Large drawings leave a lot of blank space and seem to give an empty feeling.

Infernus Lapse 03-27-2013 03:09 AM

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Posted by Sup3rn00b (Post 318275)
How about starting with smaller drawings? Large drawings leave a lot of blank space and seem to give an empty feeling.

I was thinking the same thing after i drew em, and started to draw some more on a smaller scale. Sadly, my iPad camera is too crappy to get a good picture of the drawings, so i cant show them without them looking like a bunch of gray pixels :/


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