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MariahNicole 06-18-2012 03:59 PM

A Head Shop
 
Would you shop at my head shop? (Judge By The Level, and this is my very first LEVEL!)
http://i48.tinypic.com/jtl5k6.png
2hours ago ^
http://i46.tinypic.com/t9i1p0.png
http://i50.tinypic.com/mv3lev.png
NOW^^
ignore the gray thingy that was something i clicked and my mouse was dragging

Kiko 06-18-2012 04:04 PM

Kewl, but depends on the heads :P
How do u get the era tileset D:<

MariahNicole 06-18-2012 04:07 PM

Lawdd. It is complicated let me get you the link *googles*
*back*
http://www.graalians.com/forums/showthread.php?t=455
Oh and Mariah Makes smexi headsss.

Kiko 06-18-2012 04:12 PM

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Posted by MariahNicole (Post 143487)
Lawdd. It is complicated let me get you the link *googles*
*back*
http://www.graalians.com/forums/showthread.php?t=455
Oh and Mariah Makes smexi headsss.

Heh, I wanna see 'em :P
Thx ^o^ I too am working on something ';)

NCJohn 06-18-2012 04:14 PM

Hmm, it's an ok setup but that blue and pink carpeting may induce seizures :s. Also the oriental walls don't go well with the level.

MariahNicole 06-18-2012 04:18 PM

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Posted by NCJohn (Post 143496)
Hmm, it's an ok setup but that blue and pink carpeting may induce seizures :s. Also the oriental walls don't go well with the level.

It's supposed to be girly.. :/ And I like the oriental walls. Kiko liked it. Lol

Wester 06-18-2012 04:18 PM

It all depends on the heads, but as you asked by the level, no :P..

MariahNicole 06-18-2012 04:18 PM

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Posted by Kiko (Post 143491)
Heh, I wanna see 'em :P
Thx ^o^ I too am working on something ';)

mk and np :D

NCJohn 06-18-2012 04:20 PM

Also you forgot to have the walls on the sides and back of the shop. What I meant by the oriental walls is that all those bright colors don't go with it.

MariahNicole 06-18-2012 04:22 PM

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Posted by NCJohn (Post 143505)
Also you forgot to have the walls on the sides and back of the shop. What I meant by Tw oriental walls is that all those bright colors don't go with it.

K so what walls should I use?

callimuc 06-18-2012 04:22 PM

no, no, NO, EWWW!

Sorry just had a emotional outburst.

Add some actual walls, get some style into the floor (not just simple stripes) and make it something new, awesome

NCJohn 06-18-2012 04:24 PM

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Posted by MariahNicole (Post 143507)
K so what walls should I use?

Anything but the oriental walls, you should only use the oriental walls with oriental themed levels. Also you should work on the lighting of the level and try using the blank npcs to put some items in your level.

MariahNicole 06-18-2012 04:25 PM

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Posted by callimuc (Post 143508)
no, no, NO, EWWW!

Sorry just had a emotional outburst.

Add some actual walls, get some style into the floor (not just simple stripes) and make it something new, awesome

Dude stop bashing, im a noob at this... I am trying to learn -_-"

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Posted by NCJohn (Post 143510)
Anything but the oriental walls, you should only use the oriental walls with oriental themed levels. Also you should work on the lighting of the level and try using the blank npcs to put some items in your level.

ok gonna go go try

NCJohn 06-18-2012 04:31 PM

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Posted by MariahNicole (Post 143511)
Dude stop bashing, im a noob at this... I am trying to learn -_-"

he's not bashing, he's giving constructive criticism.

callimuc 06-18-2012 04:33 PM

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Posted by NCJohn (Post 143512)
he's not bashing, he's giving constructive criticism.

I'd call it 50/50... yea its constructive criticism :P

BboyEatsbacon 06-18-2012 04:57 PM

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Posted by callimuc (Post 143513)
I'd call it 50/50... yea its constructive criticism :P

Off-Topic:
Get off the Forums and go study!!!

Johnaudi 06-18-2012 06:10 PM

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Posted by BboyEatsbacon (Post 143527)
Off-Topic:
Get off the Forums and go study!!!

True xD but give the guy some break...
And @Mariah , your level seems good as a Leveling Beginner, but you do realize that you have used some wall tiles on the floor? Take it this way, there are some blocking tiles and unblocking tiles.
Block: we can't walk thru
Unblock: walkable
I can remake your level if you want, just to show you the way it shall be done; but do have better Levels, start with the walls > empty floor> tables and extra tiles> deco the floors> NPC's
Good luck!

MariahNicole 06-18-2012 06:17 PM

yo jojo pm me in game,

callimuc 06-18-2012 08:44 PM

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Posted by BboyEatsbacon (Post 143527)
Off-Topic:
Get off the Forums and go study!!!

Can't learn 24/7 :( just for the breaks I'm going to the forums... till wednesday :P

Ace 06-18-2012 08:55 PM

nobody wants your name on the floor

MariahNicole 06-18-2012 09:45 PM

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Posted by Ace (Post 143647)
nobody wants your name on the floor

Nobody asked you to say that and the updated one in case you did not see DOES NOT have my name on it.

Ace 06-18-2012 09:46 PM

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Posted by MariahNicole (Post 143672)
Nobody asked you to say that and the updated one in case you did not see DOES NOT have my name on it.

I don't have to be asked to say something. Thanks

Johnaudi 06-18-2012 09:47 PM

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Posted by MariahNicole (Post 143672)
Nobody asked you to say that and the updated one in case you did not see DOES NOT have my name on it.

I like your new updated levels, looks much better, but of you could just fix the walls and add the interior closers for the carpets, that would fill it up a bit...

NCJohn 06-18-2012 09:55 PM

The updated one looks better but there is still several tile errors. The wood floors looks like you used the same tile over and over and it just does look right (some parts are darker outlined then others). Im glad you got rid of the oriental walls but the walls could still use some depth; they look too flat. Just play around with it and look at other levels on era.

Talon 06-18-2012 10:06 PM

Too intricate in some areas and not intricate at all on the wood in particular. Keep a nice medium of style, but not too much as to induce puking.

MariahNicole 06-18-2012 10:07 PM

Sadly I used era tiles and not iEra and...I accidently restored my computer so I lost all my graal stuff. I am not techno savy...
Luckily I had my customs on flash! save those everyday

Johnaudi 06-19-2012 05:20 AM

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Posted by MariahNicole (Post 143697)
Sadly I used era tiles and not iEra and...I accidently restored my computer so I lost all my graal stuff. I am not techno savy...
Luckily I had my customs on flash! save those everyday

Then start again from the scratch!
Anyone can create a level, but not anyone can create it right...

Cookies 06-19-2012 06:09 AM

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Posted by NCJohn (Post 143496)
Hmm, it's an ok setup but that blue and pink carpeting may induce seizures :s. Also the oriental walls don't go well with the level.

Thats JUST what I was going to say. It is too confusing.

apex 06-19-2012 09:30 AM

horrible.

Johnaudi 06-19-2012 11:30 AM

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Posted by apex (Post 143955)
horrible.

Please, we all started horrible... If you can do better then please show us =]

XENA* 06-20-2012 10:55 AM

Mariah don't take criticism bad. I agree with Callimuc, at first i was like Ewwww but for a first level i'll say it's good! Keep listening to people advices and you'll progress.

Van Canavi 06-20-2012 09:57 PM

i stopped cause i dont have no readible guide/teacher to help


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