Our New Level.
 

Hello me and iDizzy decided to make something:
http://i.imgur.com/m9pas.png
hehe

Still using Era's tile set I see.

were changing it tomorrow or monday dont worry

work is still in progress ;)

2 floating noob heads in the water catches my attention :P

Abit bland and boring, id have liked to see more effort in the bridge than it holding itsself up magically, add pillars and shape to it.

Wow, that's a pretty impressive team collaboration. Solid effort!
I like your obvious use of symmetry, almost no new variation using the tiles.
Yep, heck of a level!

Play nice

Nice job. Better than anything I could ever do with the Era tileset.

bottom of dock is way offset.
There is two of the same npc.
Water is shallow.
Get another tile set.

There NPCS there because we overwrote an event

you quoted the wrong person

The level is really bad for a collaboration, sorry.
It's symmetrical (which a good level isn't), the proportion on the walkway is way off, and the level just isn't appealing.

Also, make a shadow to go along with the bridge, it will look more realistic.

No I was talking to you, then I was telling you what Jester said

It's all changed I'll post the updated one soon

Its not "that" good. I mean, it's better than iDizzy's first level yes. But, there were many things you could have done to make it better. For example, maybe the bridge part could be a bit wider. And I don't know if that part above the poles is wall or not, but maybe if its a bridge, don't make the wall part at all, or make it small.

Not a fan of the level

100% agree with you matt, I dont see anything cool in it. (not to be rude) It looks like it was rushed

And i also agree with you :D

One last thing i want to add is, Add more stuff to your level besides chairs and tables. Like get something there that when players walk in the nw they cant stop looking at it. (my thoughts only)