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Jenny 02-25-2013 04:17 AM

Just a little somethin'
 
Haaaii so I recently made this banner for my guild (Which kinda fell apart(the guild, not the banner) before I could really finish it, I know, what luck). The banner was for a site we made for our Guild. It was meant for the Members/Rank Section. Anywho... here it tis~ Tell me watcha thank^^

http://i988.photobucket.com/albums/a...ps2771413a.jpg

BEH0LD iTz SAM 02-25-2013 04:35 AM

Cute, ur blue writing hurt my eyes tho

But then characters are


Kwwwwweeeeeel
*cartman voice*

Dusty 02-25-2013 06:26 AM

I think this piece would benefit from ditching the photoshop/special effects background. The characters themselves, while having some flaws in drawing technique are cute and not that bad. They'd benefit from taking a little extra time to draw them into a scene and it'd probably increase the image tenfold. Even if it's something lazy like them standing on a fallen tree log or something would make it way more interesting and unique than special effects.

Hadi 02-25-2013 06:32 AM

Wow that drawing is awesome!

Jenny 02-25-2013 03:46 PM

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Posted by Dusty (Post 303222)
I think this piece would benefit from ditching the photoshop/special effects background. The characters themselves, while having some flaws in drawing technique are cute and not that bad. They'd benefit from taking a little extra time to draw them into a scene and it'd probably increase the image tenfold. Even if it's something lazy like them standing on a fallen tree log or something would make it way more interesting and unique than special effects.

Haha, it's actually gimp that I use xD I was messing with the new gimp brushes I downloaded, but, no, you're totes right an actual scene in the background would look so much better- but it was meant to be a banner for the site and I kinda just wanted to make it simple on myself so I slapped that on there xD ... I've always sucked at actual legit backgrounds >_> anywho, thanks for the advice ^^

Smoke 02-25-2013 09:10 PM

I'll have to say, I like how you drew the graal hats ! exact replicas

Ignatius 02-25-2013 09:55 PM

Nice art, but I agree with Sam

DragonRider 02-26-2013 02:09 AM

Too kawaii desu for my liking, while the characters are misshapen. Meh, 6.5/10.

Jenny 02-26-2013 04:27 AM

Quote:

Posted by DragonRider (Post 303644)
Too kawaii desu for my liking, while the characters are misshapen. Meh, 6.5/10.

Care to elaborate?(:

DragonRider 02-26-2013 06:27 AM

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Posted by Jenny (Post 303701)
Care to elaborate?(:

The faces or masks are too anime while the bodies lack proper proportions and look way too misshapen. Bit sure if I case clarify any more than that...

MrSimons 02-26-2013 07:08 AM

I really like the two people on the left and right, but the second guy to the left just looks weird. Good job though, I really like your style.

Jenny 02-26-2013 09:35 PM

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Posted by DragonRider (Post 303740)
The faces or masks are too anime while the bodies lack proper proportions and look way too misshapen. Bit sure if I case clarify any more than that...

Well that was kind of what I was going for `-` ... the whole "Chibi/Anime" look so lol, yay ~ An I dont see how it's misshapen, but thanks for ur opinion (;

Quote:

Posted by MrSimons (Post 303746)
I really like the two people on the left and right, but the second guy to the left just looks weird. Good job though, I really like your style.

Thank youuu :3

Jester Lapse 02-26-2013 09:36 PM

Pretty good drawing for the style it is trying to portray. Admittedly the background does look terrible and takes away from the whole feel, but the characters themselves are nicely done.

Jenny 02-26-2013 09:39 PM

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Posted by Jester Lapse (Post 304012)
Pretty good drawing for the style it is trying to portray. Admittedly the background does look terrible and takes away from the whole feel, but the characters themselves are nicely done.


Hahah yeaaah.. as I said previously me+Backgrounds= EH... D; but I'm glad the characters themselves appeal to yuhss(:

Envi 02-27-2013 12:34 AM

Like the characters :D


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