My Attempt
 

today i attempted to make a signature here is my result, keep in mind its my first attempt http://i49.tinypic.com/ictrmu.jpg constructive comments welcome

fixed
http://i46.tinypic.com/28l3m0l.png
jk not bad for the first one

Would take me forever to say all what I wanted, but I was wondering if you had ever read a signature tutorial. if not go here than go to images they are all great choose one and read it.