Era News (12/02/11)
 

Era News

Subject: Christmas addition

Last night the landscape of iera changed as the snow pelted down in the faces of players.

So, as we usually do, we took to the streets and this is the answers we got when we asked them this question: "How do you feel about the snow in iera?"

"It hurts my eyes, I have to turn down the brightness to play now"
"It's great, to bad we cannot do anything with it"
"Epic, worth the no-update period"

And then we asked the same players this question:
"What do you want to see in iera as the month progresses?"

"Snow-Ball fights, that would be epic."
"Building snow-Men"
"A quest for a snow-man costume"

As the month progresses we will have updates on the state of iera Christmas-wise. (We are not hiring sorry guys, I thought wrongly)
Once again era news has brought the news to you first!

Special thanks:
Everyone that I interviewed

Questions? Comments? Opinions? Errors? Post them down there!

LOL!!!
Srsly, what the hell are you doing? xD

lol 3 people
=p

cool but most is already planned

Ahhhh...I think those people have some okay ideas.

Cool, but can you put issue numbers in topic names? This more of an exclusive anyway. Thumbs up.

Make these longer, put some more work into them. Advanced Mode is for actually making your posts nice, so use it. There's this thing that lets you change the font size, boldness, color, etc... Even the font. It will make it SO much better.

Example:

Era News

Subject: Christmas Addition

Last night the landscape of iEra changed as the snow pelted down in the faces of players. So, as we usually do, we took to the streets and this is the answers we got when we asked them this question: "How do you feel about the snow in iEra?"

"It hurts my eyes, I have to turn down the brightness to play now."
"It's great, to bad we cannot do anything with it."
"Epic, worth the no-update period."

And then we asked the same players this question:
"What do you want to see in iEra as the month progresses?"

"Snow-Ball fights, that would be epic."
"Building snow-men."
"A quest for a snow-man costume!"

As the month progresses we will have updates on the state of iEra Christmas-wise. (We are not hiring sorry guys, I thought wrongly)
Once again Era News has brought the news to you first!

Special thanks:
Everyone that I interviewed. Thank you for your time.

Questions? Comments? Opinions? Errors? Post them down there!

Like it? More professional, makes it better for reading, at least I think so.

+rep to Maverick, also use good capitalization.

More like:

As the month progresses we will have updates on the state of iEra Christmas-wise.
Once again Era News has brought the news to you first!

Announcment:
We are not hiring sorry guys, I thought incorrectly.

Nice edit maverick!

Thanks, Billy

By the way, an important thing is nice looking spacing. Nobody wants to read stuff that is tightly packed.