New Water Noodle (Feedback Please)
 

Hi. I just recently made this Water Noodle, such as the one you would use in a pool. It can come in different colors, but I only made blue. I was thinking it could be a sword, that will be released in the summer. Please post comments of how I can improve this, but please don't put really negative immature comments. Thanks!

P.S.-When you look at the template, it looks blury. Click it, then click it again to see it full size and the least blury.

Looks like a blue stick 0.0 but then again water noodles are blue sticks.
I think it would look a little better without the circe next to the end because nvm..

But Water Noodles are round, with a small inner hole at the end...

Getting better, although you didn't really need to use 8 colors. You could have used 2, like so:
http://i.imgur.com/Z8KZS.png

Yes, but it now doesn't have the effect of it looking that round, kinda made of foam, or a hole at the end how it usually does

It needs to be a little thicker, and have more texture. It sort of looks like a wooden stick that was painted blue. When you make it thicker, you can add more texture to make it look more "pool noodle-like." Other than what I just stated, I like the idea. It's creative. Good job.

Thanks, but I don't really understand how would I make it thicker? Do you mean more wide?

yes it does.

@Dylan-Usually, at the end, there is foam, inside that foam is a hole.

Yes, I mean more wide. It would make it look less like a stick if you made it a little wider and added some more texture ;)

Look at the hole. Its not the whole top, just the middle of the top.

Ok thanks. I'll get to work on it tomorrow when I can.

Ok. Good luck ;)

@ 5 minute fix. The foam stick now uses 3 colors. rofl I suck at positioning it on the template.
http://i.imgur.com/bllsN.png

Try making it look "grainy" like a real noodle. Just add dark specks on it

I was thinking this. It adds more texture.