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Emera 08-24-2012 03:21 PM

[Graphics]: Emera's Pixels
 
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Ahoy. I posted a thread not too long ago about a graphic I made in an attempt to get some feedback to help improve it. Since then, I've been toying with pixels ever since. The feedback I got last time when I submitted the relic dagger was amazing and helped me a lot. I figured if I post what I make here, the you guys can give me some feedback and I'll get better at pixel art! Sound like a plan? Remember, I'm new to all of this and I'm only just starting to figure out how shading works, so go easy on me ;) Any criticism is welcome as long as it's constructive (so no bashing please <3)

I'm going to kick this off with a sword I made. It's supposed to be an ice sword.

Motrox 08-24-2012 03:26 PM

Emera well done. The only thing I would say to change is the bottom of the handle.
Other than that I like it.

Emera 08-24-2012 03:33 PM

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Posted by Motrox (Post 185664)
Emera well done. The only thing I would say to change is the bottom of the handle.
Other than that I like it.

Thank you. I was actually unsure about the handle <3 I toyed with the colours quite a bit. I hope this looks better.

callimuc 08-24-2012 03:55 PM

well maybe you can give it more ice details. yet its just 3 sorts of blue. maybe you can add some icicles somehow o,O? and maybe make the lightblue line in the middle of the sword not straight, more curved

Emera 08-24-2012 04:02 PM

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Posted by callimuc (Post 185675)
well maybe you can give it more ice details. yet its just 3 sorts of blue. maybe you can add some icicles somehow o,O? and maybe make the lightblue line in the middle of the sword not straight, more curved

Something like this? I'll work on adding some ice effects, but that's going to take some thinking.

Motrox 08-24-2012 04:13 PM

icicles at the bottom of the handle would be cool.

Emera 08-24-2012 04:17 PM

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I've added some cracks through the blade to make it look more authentic. I like how the cracks have turned out.

callimuc 08-24-2012 05:16 PM

thats a big improvement on the shading (making it more look like an icicle)

fsh 08-24-2012 05:18 PM

I like it very much.

Emera 08-24-2012 07:27 PM

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A small wooden-handled dagger. I don't really like the handle though :( Any suggestions on how I could improve it?

Jester Lapse 08-24-2012 07:35 PM

you dont always have to add the bulge on the bottom <3

Emera 08-24-2012 07:39 PM

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Posted by Jester Lapse (Post 185820)
you dont always have to add the bulge on the bottom <3

I like mah bulge >:O! Would it look better without though?

Chaotic 08-24-2012 08:04 PM

Try giving the ice sword a dark blue outline on the blade, and on the dagger it looks a little weird without a hilt, but i love the ice one

Emera 08-24-2012 08:09 PM

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Posted by Chaotic (Post 185852)
Try giving the ice sword a dark blue outline on the blade, and on the dagger it looks a little weird without a hilt, but i love the ice one

Do you mean replace the black outline with dark blue? or go around it with dark blue.

eric 08-24-2012 08:20 PM

The dagger could be dualled if ever added!!!! :D


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