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You used tethering a lot where it should be appearing to shine. Also the black looks flat due to lack of shading. You need a broader color selection. Also you shouldn't even use tethering on shine, but seeing as you did you used a lot. It just look flat and bland to me. Meh
I'm assuming it's supposed to be a helmet? The visor shouldn't go all the way across. Looks cheesy
Also it looks like the lower right of your visor is shaded into the helmet itself?
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One thing, my camera is crappy, so the blending wasn't picked up well.
Second, it's not a dirt bike helmet, the visor needs to be all the way across or it will "actually" look cheesy.
Third, It's still a work in progress, so I'd rather get suggestions on how to improve it, not what's wrong
Thank you.