Actually I think I've taken everyone's advice so far so that argument is a bit invalid. Bam told me to work on my line art. Seems like I'm improving on it. Mak said remove the mask as it doesn't fit all heads. Did that. I added some more shading like was suggested. The reason it looks terrible is because I had to keep replying to flame posts over and over. I am allowed to defend myself on these forums, and calling me a liar for something that he knows nothing about is ignorant