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Kiwi · 06-26-2012

Well, the creativity is there, and that is good.

However, I do have things that I don't like.

You've used far too many NPCs.
I think that NPCs are good and all, but too many makes a level cluttered. You have a random opened chest in the middle of the grass!

Your beach is too straight.
You've started with making it more random and more realistic, but not yet

While I'm not going to edit the image to point them out, you have several tile errors.
Examples include: The cliffs in the top-right, the grass>water area in the top right... The are more, of course.

Generally things could just be a whole lot more realistically shaped, something which I have trouble with, and using less NPCs, and not placing blocking and useless objects all over the grass.

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Kiwi Registered User Join Date: Mar 2012 Location: New Zealand Posts: 2,956	Well, the creativity is there, and that is good. However, I do have things that I don't like. You've used far too many NPCs. I think that NPCs are good and all, but too many makes a level cluttered. You have a random opened chest in the middle of the grass! Your beach is too straight. You've started with making it more random and more realistic, but not yet While I'm not going to edit the image to point them out, you have several tile errors. Examples include: The cliffs in the top-right, the grass>water area in the top right... The are more, of course. Generally things could just be a whole lot more realistically shaped, something which I have trouble with, and using less NPCs, and not placing blocking and useless objects all over the grass.