Posted by Kiwi.

Well, the creativity is there, and that is good.

However, I do have things that I don't like.

• You've used far too many NPCs.
  I think that NPCs are good and all, but too many makes a level cluttered. You have a random opened chest in the middle of the grass!

• Your beach is too straight.
  You've started with making it more random and more realistic, but not yet

• While I'm not going to edit the image to point them out, you have several tile errors.
  Examples include: The cliffs in the top-right, the grass>water area in the top right... The are more, of course.

Generally things could just be a whole lot more realistically shaped, something which I have trouble with, and using less NPCs, and not placing blocking and useless objects all over the grass.