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Higbey · 11-20-2012

now for a true critique on the tileset, it needs a lot of work, the building looks like a undecorated gingerbread house with ice for windowpanes, its all the same brown plasticy material,

the water looks like a lit pool, youve got a puddle with rippley clear water that looks 3 ft deep, if its not animated it will look weird, and for natural little puddles it looks like a pools water.

the grass is diagonal, i mean it kinda looks like pokemons grass, but in pokemon that was just little bits, the entire fields didnt get striped in the more modern games, it appears to go to straight chocalate mud paths, no real buffing or transition, and its jarring, and is very blocky but doesnt really work that way with its style. the fence is good, and looks like wood, unlike your brass plated house, but i can already see one obvious error where it doesnt connect, in the one and only preview of your content, and is that grey thing your logo? why would a server named LEAFae have a grey logo that fits together like that instead of the L in it being contrasted? is the thing behind it a leaf? broaden it, make it lusterly green, add a stem to the leaf that extends behind it so its easier to tell, and if your going to use a deciduous leafs why are you using those tubular conifers that seem similar but both lack a point?

for the one peek you show for a server that you are asking people to devote time to, you sure dont make a very good argument for it, then again, the last times this thread got into a argument you recreated the thread to delete it all.

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Higbey Not Banned Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: Hell Posts: 4,885	now for a true critique on the tileset, it needs a lot of work, the building looks like a undecorated gingerbread house with ice for windowpanes, its all the same brown plasticy material, the water looks like a lit pool, youve got a puddle with rippley clear water that looks 3 ft deep, if its not animated it will look weird, and for natural little puddles it looks like a pools water. the grass is diagonal, i mean it kinda looks like pokemons grass, but in pokemon that was just little bits, the entire fields didnt get striped in the more modern games, it appears to go to straight chocalate mud paths, no real buffing or transition, and its jarring, and is very blocky but doesnt really work that way with its style. the fence is good, and looks like wood, unlike your brass plated house, but i can already see one obvious error where it doesnt connect, in the one and only preview of your content, and is that grey thing your logo? why would a server named LEAFae have a grey logo that fits together like that instead of the L in it being contrasted? is the thing behind it a leaf? broaden it, make it lusterly green, add a stem to the leaf that extends behind it so its easier to tell, and if your going to use a deciduous leafs why are you using those tubular conifers that seem similar but both lack a point? for the one peek you show for a server that you are asking people to devote time to, you sure dont make a very good argument for it, then again, the last times this thread got into a argument you recreated the thread to delete it all.