Speaking of assignments, my teacher assigned everyone elements to do a full 4 page report on and I got silver. That's when I knew it was meant to be. (I lucked out, silver, molybdenum, and ruthenium are the ones I know best..)
Doesn't really have a very good ending
Needs more of the theme and storyline than backstory and profiles.
4 Star General needs to be a little more in a way, general-ish(If you know what I mean.)