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Well it's funny, but are you sure your teacher won't think you're messing around?
I did something similar and got into trouble because they thought I was.
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am messing around. But I am also doing exactly what I need to do and more, and am perfectly behaved as well as getting nothing below an A. (wow, that's pretty much the most vain thing I've said in my life). She can't complain.
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I like what you're doing with the typography, great color choices as well. I feel like you have a few great ideas, but the design itself needs to be more dynamic. Perhaps if the spoon art was flipped to the bottom right side, and you turned the pink and brown lines at a slight diagonal towards bottom left edges? I also find the spacing between 'cats are fun/sideways is fun' and 'spleens are fun. rulers are fun. . .' a little funny as well; though I can't think of any specific ways to fix it o: My thoughts, anyhow
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I agree, I still think the whole "...are fun" bit looks off. I like having the sideways and stuff, but it looks weird. I'll look at making it diagonal, this is due tomorrow
thanks Latte!
http://i.imgur.com/eRVY7Ph.png
it's A4 sized, so it's quite big