I took my time with these edits just to show you guys what i mean, I'm sorry if you think im a little too harsh but i'm just being honest and trying to help you. I Hope you guys become great pixel artists in the long run and i know you guys can do it ;) Now i think ive helped everyone that hasnt been helped yet
Good stuff as usual ihot! I think you should try looking at perspective more and start to put it in your work, could look really good
Right now the nose looks broken try making it face the way the perspective is in, looks heaps better. The hair should look like hair (texure), right now it looks like a swimming cap or something lel. In this edit i tried editing the moon a lil and your stars to show you a few pointers, Also the clothing could use some creases to make it more nomal looking. Heres what i think would look a little more appealing
Well the top views look to small, maybe make them longer? and a little more contrast wouldn't hurt
Indeed this resembles delteria but the highlights seems to bright, Colors are well not a good mix up. I know you are using delterias pallette but those colors arent necessarily the best choice. I suggest making it more teddy bear-ish like. Try adding AA and use highlights more efficiently, Heres an edit to show you how i wouldve done it
k ty for thread like this hopefully this works out and shows as png I can't seem to submit it on graalians any other way via ipad(pc's broke) 
Personally I think I just need help in mastering shading as I don't really know where to start from, anyways heres a rough hat I made for player hat shop in zone(sent before this) but also posted here more for help for me to progress because I really want to get more of my graphics on game and improve generally.
or maybe this way might not show as jpeg:
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Contrast is the key my friend! As jester said you should define your lightsource, i think you really should it will help massively. I like the line art except for the part where the gold line is, it just has some jagged pixel there i suggest you fix that too haha. If your not sure on what i mean by contrast heres a small edit i did. (contrast is the difference between the colors) Well thats what i think it is lol
Hmm i see why. First of all the line art is jagged you could make it less jaggy. Second off all its great seeing that you have distinguished a light source but you were using the shading in a wrong way. You are just shading it for the hell of it, it seems that way. Shading is made to show depth in a piece all you have done is gradient shade it. And finally again i would like to say that contrast is key! If you use that your art would be tops and you could have control over your artwork more. Lol your dino looks like the one from toy story <3.
Here is an edit i did with only 5 colors, I havent touched the line art just shading to show volume. (i couldnt be bothered doing the whole thing, sorry
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This is a car I made in paint. This is my first time making a car so many shading and details are wrong. I am also not sure about the sizes of it (maybe its too big) so if anybody has a car template I would like to use it to fix the sizes of my car. Thnx.
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I like the shape, really cool. You should try taking more control with your colors, Like i said contrast is key. try adding a logo on the car to make it look realistic and try doing what latte said i find it helpful. I think your a visual learner so i took my time to edit your car to show what i meant by contrast etc.
