Posted by Sup3rn00b

by the way, is it a mermaid?

Posted by Sage_Shadowbane

Very nice Latte. Though you're missing a few key things for doing a piece like this. Your first major fault in the piece is your lack of a definitive light source (Which you'd like benefit from having 1 more color added), and secondly, the definition of the character itself. Your piece as a whole is good, but your character is more or less blending in with the hair.. which it shouldn't. You could start helping this by simply outlining more of the character herself. Also one thing I noticed is the composition of the stomache and the "mermaid" part of her in comparison, her stomach seems to be contradicting the direction the mermaid part is facing. I'm kind of drunk at the moment so me explaining this probably won't go as well as I hope. But in any case I did a VERY quick edit to show you what I'm talking about. It's pretty sloppy and I didn't take my time but it should still get the point across as to what I'm talking about. I only used one more color btw. Hope to see an update soon!