It's not bad, but considering the other threads on Zone Guns, this is nothing special. However, with some work I could see it being better than the other threads. I'd recommend organizing it a bit better. Adding damage and clip size first, then on a new paragraph explain anything extra players should acknowledge about the gun, then on a new paragraph give your opinion on the gun.
For example;
ER Beamer
Damage - 5
Clip Size - 6
The ER Beamer is your default weapon. It has a very small clip of 6. This guns ROF is quite slow.
Be ready for reloading a lot. It'll slows you down.. small price, you get 5 damage on the gun. This gun is really good if you can manage the reload on it. Infact, it can beat the metallic and LR pulsar guns if you can land the hits. Due to the low ROF and reload speed, I recommend you upgrade ASAP.
Of course, just my opinion on your thread. How it looks is entirely up to you, and some people have different opinions. One isn't wrong or right, as I'm sure you know.