Page one review- Doesn't matter
Page two review- fake is relative. You can do magic, I suggest martial arts classes to really connect to your body. That's where your magic comes from.
Page three review-future? lol. Good and evil are relative and are usually judgements expressed in diagnosis. Not a really productive or sustainable way of living your life.
Page four review-people do ruin there life's. People are born into tragic life's. Idk but if you stand for what you believe in with some sort integrity things could be pretty chill.
You can evolve
I wrote what you wrote when I was kid now I'm writing this.