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No but if someone is dong something bad, just say you know you can get banned from that. And if they dont care then thats there fault. But you do not have to post a whole thread about it
Btw you need a comma before gg, gg
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No, if someone misbehave, just tell them that they can get punished for that. If they don't care, then that's their fault. You don't have to create a thread for it.
Btw, you need a comma before gg, gg  |
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You need to put a comma after the word, "No," because try saying it in real life. You will pause a little bit after saying it. Also took "but" out because it was unnecessary.
I also took, "And," out of your original post because that's a conjunction; you never put a conjunction at the beginning of a sentence. You also got "there," and "their", mixed up. Let me give you a brief example of them both.
There: When someone uses this word, they usually mean it in a positional way. For example, "can you please get that book over
there for me?"
Their: This word usually refers to a group of people (people means more than one person). It means belonging to a group of people. Here are some example of how to use it:
This is their house...
Their favorite hang out spot is that building
Their house is so beautiful
My grammars aren't very good, but hope this grammar guide can help you in the future.