Posted by Areo

This is how you report something. First of all, use a bigger font for your headline.

Also, make your headline more eye-catching. Like so



The Gondola Upgrade You Didn't Notice



Look at that, easy on the eyes but also eye catching.



Secondly, take pride in your facts. Take this statement from your article. "Upgrading the gondola between delta island and... Castle island?"



No, not like that. Like this



"Engineers have been hard at work upgrading the gondola between Delta Island and the Castle of Graal"



See the difference? Be proud and confident with your facts. You have potential, kid. You see the headlines before they drop, now you just need to refine your style.



- Former graalporter Areo