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Hoot · 02-23-2016

UPDATE:
Thanks for all the help! I think i'm gonna change a lot of the plot and add make it a little more interesting.

hey so I am entering a one act play contest and I have an idea for what I want to write.

My idea is a story about a women who has this crush on this guy and the first scene starts in kindergarden, then the next is the begning of middle school, etc. the idea is she is inlove with this boy and as time goes on she gets more love for him, but the odds of him liking her back become less and less. Finally as the senior ball gets closer she builds up the gut to ask him out but she is turned down and runs away before he can explain his reasoning. She goes home and goes into depression.

Now heres where I need help. How do I end this? I had the idea of her commiting scuicide and then the last scene is a scene of her crush at her grave telling her he said no because he promised to bring his best friend to the dance, and how he wanted to bring her because he had the biggest crush on her since

Or is this to deep and sad?!?!?! I want this play to be very realstic, and funny, but still has a serious and awkward vibe around it
Any ideas how to end this, or ideas for the play?

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Hoot a majestic bird Join Date: Feb 2016 Location: New York State Posts: 11	writing a play... UPDATE: Thanks for all the help! I think i'm gonna change a lot of the plot and add make it a little more interesting. hey so I am entering a one act play contest and I have an idea for what I want to write. My idea is a story about a women who has this crush on this guy and the first scene starts in kindergarden, then the next is the begning of middle school, etc. the idea is she is inlove with this boy and as time goes on she gets more love for him, but the odds of him liking her back become less and less. Finally as the senior ball gets closer she builds up the gut to ask him out but she is turned down and runs away before he can explain his reasoning. She goes home and goes into depression. Now heres where I need help. How do I end this? I had the idea of her commiting scuicide and then the last scene is a scene of her crush at her grave telling her he said no because he promised to bring his best friend to the dance, and how he wanted to bring her because he had the biggest crush on her since Or is this to deep and sad?!?!?! I want this play to be very realstic, and funny, but still has a serious and awkward vibe around it Any ideas how to end this, or ideas for the play? Last edited by Hoot; 02-24-2016 at 02:46 AM.