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The last paragraph is him reminiscing aka reliving the past. It isn't during his current position.
If you're talking about after he said "I begin to reminisce" all after is him reliving the past. Apparently I didn't word it right to the point where people recognize that it is the past. I don't want people to get confused.
Any tips on what to reword/restructure?
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You also switched tenses in a few spots. Try sticking to just present tense. I think for the last paragraph you just need to add clarification by adding to it in certain parts.