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07-05-2012
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RiCE KiNGS
Join Date: Dec 2011
Location: Earth
Posts: 385
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Advice for the Head I'm Working On?
So, I've decided that I am going to try and make my own head from scratch. Here is a screenshot of it in GIMP... Any advice...? I know the hair sucks and I want to know how to make it better. http://i45.tinypic.com/66vo28.gif (Unsupported image host) |
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07-05-2012
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Dark Desert Fox
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: United States, Ohio
Posts: 5,720
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The hair could use some more shading along with the face. I would also make the chin more roundish instead of pointy. It looks good though so far nice job.
Last edited by Tyler; 07-06-2012 at 04:25 PM.
Reason: I said ship instead of chin... wow...
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07-06-2012
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GRAPHIC ARTIST
Join Date: Oct 2011
Location: Germany
Posts: 338
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more contrast, brighter colors!
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07-07-2012
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Euphoria
Join Date: Apr 2012
Location: Scotland
Posts: 344
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Are you wanting to see hair strands? If yes, then add more outline.
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07-07-2012
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don't call it a comeback
Join Date: Sep 2011
Posts: 8,268
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On-topic, I like your graphic - it isn't bad for a first start. I would suggest moving the eyes down to cover up more of the forehead with hair, and the overall shape isn't really like a head. It's more like an egg - heads should be more like the shape of an apple, or maybe an orange, but a big orange, more like a grapefruit really? |
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