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The Overlord
Join Date: Jun 2012
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A body design I made.
I decided to try out making a body for myself from scratch, and I wanted to know if this design is good and if it needs anything to make it better. This is my first time making anything like this, so I don't really know how to judge my own work. Constructive criticism appreciated. It's a bit small though, sorry.
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Dark Desert Fox
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: United States, Ohio
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Let's see where to begin. I'll start with outlines. The red and black portions of the body do not have an outline. Second, I don't see any arms. I see bulges in which I am assuming are part of the pants, but I don't know. I would work on it. I like the combination of the red and black digital like inlines.
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Graalian
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: Belle Isle
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Meanwhile I'm still trying to figure out what the hell that thing even is.
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Registered User
Join Date: Oct 2011
Location: Fairfield, California
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is it fullmetal alchemist (gluttony) with that waist it kinda does
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:)
Join Date: Sep 2011
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Ya, I'm not too sure what it is either...
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Banned
Join Date: May 2012
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It's NES style!
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I like pie
Join Date: Jun 2012
Location: KENTUCKY!
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WHAT IS THIS D:
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GraalOnline Era PR
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: NY, United States
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It looks like an electronic pair of pants.
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The Overlord
Join Date: Jun 2012
Location: I have no idea
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Your comments are funny.  It's supposed to be a villainous robe type thing. It looks more like a cloak though, since it has no arms. I'll add an outline, and it's not from FMA, it's actually based off Ghetsis' robe/cloak thing from Pokemon. I'll try to make it look less like pants. ^-^
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Euphoria
Join Date: Apr 2012
Location: Scotland
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Cool. Me likey.
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GraalOnline Era PR
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: NY, United States
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Use shading.
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The Overlord
Join Date: Jun 2012
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here and there
Join Date: Sep 2011
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Good idea, poor exucution. Try shading. Search around .
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