Great typography, very nice minimalism. The composition is top-notch, making for a very clean and concise ad.

I love it.  

Posted by Kiwi

latte I tried the diagonal strip, but I can't organize it so all the text fits . It looks a lot better, the text just doesn't fit, and there's heaps of extra pink space.

http://puu.sh/1YwBk

I like this better too O: As for the space, hrm; perhaps you put the 'spleens are fun' textbox to the right, like set it on the http://gyazo.com/d15050bfd26b35b3e6ae345e6ac53ad9.png?1360200852 (Unsupported image host) setting. (lol idk the technical term) Then experiment on where to place it from there, or maybe leave it in the same spot.

Also, idk how I feel about this, but wanted to see what it looked like; edited the pink and brown lines in a V formation - http://gyazo.com/1c76f73317df90bc9a6b83253fa10e9b  

Posted by Latte

perhaps you put the 'spleens are fun' textbox to the right, like set it on the http://gyazo.com/d15050bfd26b35b3e6ae345e6ac53ad9.png?1360200852 (Unsupported image host) setting. (lol idk the technical term)

Right justify.

 

Posted by Talon

Right justify.

right
ahahaha
ha
;u; ty  

I love the humour

post results pls  

Posted by LavaClaw

I love the humour

post results pls

results?

also you guys converted me to the version Latte suggested. But I forgot to save it, so I'll have to redo it ._.  

http://i.imgur.com/KiaVkXu.png

went with this version. Any other suggestions?  

by results i mean the teachers grade + comments  

oh, well, this isn't going to be graded I think. but I know I'll get comments  

^('-')^
luv it.  

I want a spoon 3TM  

I much prefer the original version, it is more comfortable to look at.