I wrote this

Take me somewhere
By Kat
Take me somewhere,
Far from home.
Take me somewhere,
Away from friend or foe.
Take me somewhere,
I want to be.
Where all things love and no things see.

Critique? Comments?  

Story of an emo lol? Who wants to be away from friends?

It flows quite nicely though so well done with that!  

Nice poem, I like it.

Posted by Tricxta

Story of an emo lol? Who wants to be away from friends?

Friends can be just as stressful as enemies  

Posted by Tricxta

Story of an emo lol? Who wants to be away from friends? :(

It flows quite nicely though so well done with that! :)

It's supposed to be like, they just want to start clean. And what Rufus said.
But thank you :)  

I like all poetry because I can't write that ****.  

As a lover of poetry and a feeler of emotions, I can relate to this poem as well as read it with an open heart, taking in what it means and receiving that fulfilling feeling of a unique knowledge.

Posted by KatGoesRawr

Where all things love and no things see.

This part confuses me. Explain?  

Posted by Shannon

As a lover of poetry and a feeler of emotions, I can relate to this poem as well as read it with an open heart, taking in what it means and receiving that fulfilling feeling of a unique knowledge.



This part confuses me. Explain?

Basically saying, no one judges by looks. Everyone loves each other for who they are.  

Posted by KatGoesRawr

Basically saying, no one judges by looks. Everyone loves each other for who they are.

Ah, I was caught up in the literal meaning of the word see, as I was caught up in the literal meaning of the word love. Excellent poem, I would definitely love to read another one! ^_^  

Posted by Shannon

Ah, I was caught up in the literal meaning of the word see, as I was caught up in the literal meaning of the word love. Excellent poem, I would definitely love to read another one! ^_^

Thanks