Ummm good attempt, needs to be alot more indepth though, mabey add screenshots, pictures and more indepth locations than just "the shell shop" mabey show a pic of where it is, how much the guns are, and more punctuation, normally that isnt as imported but since this is a guide it needs to be 110%, mabey view some of the other guides and try model yours similar to the way they did it.