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I like this thread idea, would give rep but must spread
Teeth/head shapes are good P: Arms need just a tad more shading. In general though, I think your colors are kind of shy of each other, like 'im light green, I can't be next 2 u dark green'. That's not necessarily true; using the different shades against each other are important when giving art a texture. Careful dithering will also make shade differences less harsh. I'd experiment a little bit with that; my take on it anyhow P:
Oh and lastly, to fix your pillowshading on the headlights, try making an outline of the detail inside a headlight, and add highlights/light source later.
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My fav is the flame <3 I just love the coloring on it. Jester already mentioned how the shape should be more frenzy-like though. As for the bear, hmmm... I think you're using the light brown (#a07850) for too many things. Like, it's being used as part of the bear's tummy, as though it was sewn that way, but also for the highlights of the head and arms. At least, it looks like a highlight since a teddy bear isn't normally sewn that way. I can understand that you're probably going for less colors, but this one might need another highlight color to make it easier. All in all, I feel like there isn't enough distinction between what's a highlight and what's sewn on the bear. And for the graphic in the middle o: What Jester said |
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I took my time with these edits just to show you guys what i mean, I'm sorry if you think im a little too harsh but i'm just being honest and trying to help you. I Hope you guys become great pixel artists in the long run and i know you guys can do it ;) Now i think ive helped everyone that hasnt been helped yet
Indeed this resembles delteria but the highlights seems to bright, Colors are well not a good mix up. I know you are using delterias pallette but those colors arent necessarily the best choice. I suggest making it more teddy bear-ish like. Try adding AA and use highlights more efficiently, Heres an edit to show you how i wouldve done it
Here is an edit i did with only 5 colors, I havent touched the line art just shading to show volume. (i couldnt be bothered doing the whole thing, sorry )
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And don't feel ashamed that I pointed you out on this, trust me, it happens a lot. I find it rather flattering. But everyone starts somewhere, so do your best in adding some creativity to an otherwise boring piece of mine. |
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Also to add some more realism...possibly de-flatten the back of the buttstock? It might help to add a bit more shape rather than a straight line down. |
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Edit: Finished Redoing it and resubmitted for Zone PlayerHatShop
Last edited by G Fatal; 02-14-2013 at 08:31 PM.
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