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Professional iPhone Hater
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: Canada
Posts: 454
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You forgot the ending credits, which take 12 minutes.
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12-31-2011
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BestSparrerOfAllTime
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: CakeLand
Posts: 903
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Oh dear it seems the graal resteraunt serves cake now.. we're all in danger. Anways, I'm good with scripting. Example of my writing: "3.17.24 was sprawled on the wall, glimmering in the dimming light of the setting sun. It seemed to almost be written in crushed diamond, yet it was warping around itself, turning in the dark atmosphere. Adeline blinked, her soft blonde hair jostling as she moved, trying to get a better look at the numbers, but they were gone from her sight. She turned around, trying to find them once more, but as she was only 8 at the time, she did not understand. The sparkling numbers on the wall were no where to be seen, as if gobbled by the darkness. Adeline clawed at the pink covers of her bed, tucking her head underneath them as if they would protect her from the future set in stone. As she calmed down her ragged breaths turned into whispers, then snores. At last the girl was asleep. The next morning, the light shone through and woke her from the slumber. Stretching, she pulled her arms from beneath the warm blankets, having forgotten the events of the night before. But they would not end at that night, although soon forgotten they would come back, if only she could wait a few years. Adeline padded across the floor, her parents still asleep in the room besides her. Tip-toeing across the hardwood floor, she made her way to the kitchen. Yawning, she reached up to grab a piece of candy off the ceramic bowl on the counter. Popping it in her mouth, Adeline headed back up to her room and began to play with her dolls, just like any normal 8 year old girl may do after forgetting the numbers written on their wall from last night." (From a story im writing. )
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Professional Burger
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: McDonalds
Posts: 2,564
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12-31-2011
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Idle like a boss!
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: Canada, eh?
Posts: 789
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I'm an assigned Set Builder, hellz yeah! I think I might record my voice and try to apply for Voice Actor too, although I'll probably sound like a little kiddy.
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12-31-2011
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Registered User
Join Date: Dec 2011
Location: Home: Texas
Posts: 15
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ill just be posting a sound bit of voice thin ^_^
Last edited by Tommy Pulse; 12-31-2011 at 07:36 AM.
Reason: didnt read (D3RP)
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12-31-2011
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Not Banned
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: Hell
Posts: 4,885
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a angsty teen boy whos village was crushed by a dark force and his parents killed, and he is the chosen one destined to kill the villain....how original /sarcasm also i just found a perfect set. work a giant mountain rock fortress into the script. I found Pixs forttress. its amazing |
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12-31-2011
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Banned
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: Forums
Posts: 284
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I think the premise is odd, it doesn't relate to Graal or the Minecraft server at all. Bringing in a character that doesn't even exist among us Graal characters makes it stranger considering that Higbey is supposedly the main villian, and trying to emulate a dark side or trying to cause viewers to emit feelings or emotions for the main character pretty much ruins the whole comedy factor. Take Spaceballs for example, that was a straight out comedic video. Sure it had a plot and ultimately a goal to defeat Darth Helmet (Something like that, I can't remember since it's been so long), but the rest was just thrown in comedy. I don't even think thirty minutes is long enough to form a high relationship with the character unless you did something really epic, but still that would ruin the comedic factor. I was thinking of it being more like Higbey is causing horrible things to happen to all Graalian residents on the server and then ultimately all Graalians banding together to stop Higbey and his plans. Something really simple to make the cut of thirty minutes and something that will allow for many comedic scenes to take place. I'm just mainly concerned about time management and the comedic/action genre of the movie. |
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12-31-2011
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Professional Burger
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: McDonalds
Posts: 2,564
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The plans for the first city are here! Check it out! I renamed the city Onnet Town. ![]() [EDIT] Here is the style i want the houses designed in!
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12-31-2011
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Idle like a boss!
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: Canada, eh?
Posts: 789
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Get me some materials mang.
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12-31-2011
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Scientist
Join Date: Aug 2011
Location: California, USA
Posts: 1,491
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Now my competitive writing side begins to show itself. The short story needs to be in the form of a script right?
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12-31-2011
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Professional Burger
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: McDonalds
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12-31-2011
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Scientist
Join Date: Aug 2011
Location: California, USA
Posts: 1,491
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Nah, nevermind, I can't do comedy.
Last edited by Cat612; 12-31-2011 at 09:17 PM.
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Registered User
Join Date: Dec 2011
Location: Home: Texas
Posts: 15
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Last edited by Tommy Pulse; 12-31-2011 at 08:59 AM.
Reason: for some reason the immage wasnt poping up but heres a link.
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Professional Burger
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: McDonalds
Posts: 2,564
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Onnet town is almost complete! We need to fill in the circle in the middle with gold and add a fountain... then add some other details to the houses (like finishing the inside of Stephan's house) and we will be pretty much done! All we need is some skins (and a script) and we can start shooting the first act! Some nice guys over at Turtle Craft helped me build this and set us up a free area to use in creative mode, with a whitelist to prevent greifing! How great is that? Ill send you the ip if you ask.
Last edited by Pimpsy G.; 12-31-2011 at 10:00 AM.
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Registered User
Join Date: Dec 2011
Location: Home: Texas
Posts: 15
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How the crap do you get pictures on btw >.>
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