OK, I have made A Re-make of the lobby here it is...
Here we go, This one is the Right Arena1 ( Arena is 3x3 )  

Posted by AxeLux

OK, I have made A Re-make of the lobby here it is...

Its pretty good but their are some errors in the lobby:

-I drew in black, the back parts of the wall you need to add. You can't only do part of the back wall, you must finish it.
-The red question mark, is that area supposed to be a bridge like ceiling where players can walk under it? If yes, make sure you make it an npc (just take a screen shot of the level, go to microsoft paint, paste, select the part that you want to let players walk under, copy, open a new paint window, paste, save.
Note: If it is not 8-bit, go to gimp and make it an 8-bit.
After you do that, put the npc in your level and write this script:

PHP Code:

if (created) {
  dontblock;
  drawoverplayer;
} 


-I circled, in green, the greyish outline of the floor. In my opinion, it would look better if you moved those in a bit.
-The light greyish floor outline tiles look a little too neat and straight. So I drew, in pink, what I think you should make the outline-grey floor tiles look like.

Good Job =D

Posted by AxeLux

Here we go, This one is the Right Arena1 ( Arena is 3x3 )

The Right Arena1 level has a couple errors too:

-You need to add the back walls, I drew them in red.
-Once you add the back walls there will be less walking space so you need to move everything circled in green down.
-Then you would need to move everything circled in blue even more down.

That's it. Good levels, don't stop! =D  

Posted by Dude1310

Its pretty good but their are some errors in the lobby:

-I drew in black, the back parts of the wall you need to add. You can't only do part of the back wall, you must finish it.
-The red question mark, is that area supposed to be a bridge like ceiling where players can walk under it? If yes, make sure you make it an npc (just take a screen shot of the level, go to microsoft paint, paste, select the part that you want to let players walk under, copy, open a new paint window, paste, save.
Note: If it is not 8-bit, go to gimp and make it an 8-bit.
After you do that, put the npc in your level and write this script:

PHP Code:

if (created) {
  dontblock;
  drawoverplayer;
} 


-I circled, in green, the greyish outline of the floor. In my opinion, it would look better if you moved those in a bit.
-The light greyish floor outline tiles look a little too neat and straight. So I drew, in pink, what I think you should make the outline-grey floor tiles look like.

Good Job =D



The Right Arena1 level has a couple errors too:

-You need to add the back walls, I drew them in red.
-Once you add the back walls there will be less walking space so you need to move everything circled in green down.
-Then you would need to move everything circled in blue even more down.

That's it. Good levels, don't stop! =D

The Tiles you might see as "bridges " where suppose to be a wall for a door that was supposed to be there, but I don't have the .png of the doors ( the one from the event house)  

oh i see  

Posted by Dude1310

oh i see

ok, I finished what you told me to Fix.  

I found some more wall errors you need to fix. The wall errors are colored green.
And you might want to edit the light grey-outline floor tiles a little more (blue).  

Posted by Dude1310

I found some more wall errors you need to fix. The wall errors are colored green.
And you might want to edit the light grey-outline floor tiles a little more (blue).

I'll fix the wall's thanks  

Posted by AxeLux

I'll fix the wall's thanks

You're Welcome  

ok, fixed.  

You still have errors on the wall. Do you mind sending me the level so i can fix the errors really fast? If you don't want to send it then I'll try to explain the errors the best i can.  

Posted by Dude1310

You still have errors on the wall. Do you mind sending me the level so i can fix the errors really fast? If you don't want to send it then I'll try to explain the errors the best i can.

Please explain, This is my first level and I wanted to complete this achievment myself..

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WAIT, I think I know what you're triyng to say!  

Ok after you've edited I'll see if you edited what I was thinking  

If this one doesn't fix my problem, then I don't know what will

Am I on the right Track D:?

- Facepalm -
tell me which one is closer to being fixed, 1st or 2nd.  

WAIT...YOU GOT IT! The second one is exact! You fixed the wall errors!

wait no.... I see 3 more wall errors, but you fixed the main problem! I congragulate you for that(:  

Posted by Dude1310

WAIT...YOU GOT IT! The second one is exact! You fixed the wall errors!

Let me try what you're saying.

Posted by Dude1310

WAIT...YOU GOT IT! The second one is exact! You fixed the wall errors!

yay! wheres my cookie.

Posted by Dude1310

WAIT...YOU GOT IT! The second one is exact! You fixed the wall errors!

wait no.... I see 3 more wall errors, but you fixed the main problem! I congragulate you for that(:

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Thanks! +Rep for all the hard work you Put into helping me with my first level

Posted by Dude1310

WAIT...YOU GOT IT! The second one is exact! You fixed the wall errors!

wait no.... I see 3 more wall errors, but you fixed the main problem! I congragulate you for that(:

LOL, got happy too soon.