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11-23-2011
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here and there
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11-23-2011
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MysTe
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As Kat said, newspapers don't have biased stuff. Everything should be either fact, or somebody's opinion maybe countering somebody else's. If not, this is just a post where you talk about your opinion. And if somebody wanted to know that, they would ask you.
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11-23-2011
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busy
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: Richmond, VA
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Needs comics and coloring pages
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11-23-2011
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(Domination)
Join Date: Sep 2011
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Okay forget you all,I like it.It looks like he wasted so much time doing this for you guys but you still can't be pleased.I could still read this article and besides he's a first timer give him a break,he'll try to make it non-biased.That's why he might have a news crew. I mean seriously,no body is perfect and not everyone has "perfect" grammar.At least he even tried. Anyways Zero,good job and keep it up no matter what others have to say about it. Oh and It's okay if you guys give ideas,I just hate the complaining. |
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11-23-2011
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ಠ_ಠ
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11-23-2011
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Nerd
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11-24-2011
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(Domination)
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11-24-2011
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BestSparrerOfAllTime
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Location: CakeLand
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11-24-2011
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Pixels for breakfast!
Join Date: Oct 2011
Location: Florida, United States
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I agree with the feedback. The suggestions are dead on. I'm a grammar freak! Like saying "she ran" when you meant to say "she is running." So your incorrect phrase is "she is ran to the car," when you should be saying "she is running to the car." DragonRiderSux... Give me my quote back! Just kidding. |
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11-24-2011
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Summoner and Philosopher
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: Everywhere to hunt and recruit demons
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maybe it be easier if i had a team to help me with the news
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11-24-2011
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Le Wubbz
Join Date: Nov 2011
Location: United States
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Oh the turkeys are gone... I didn't get the pitchfork... oh well I wasn't going to use it much anyways  Nice job on the news! |
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11-24-2011
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Pixels for breakfast!
Join Date: Oct 2011
Location: Florida, United States
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Then PM me your post and I'll check it for you for errors when I can.
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11-24-2011
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Summoner and Philosopher
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11-24-2011
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Pixels for breakfast!
Join Date: Oct 2011
Location: Florida, United States
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Nah. Just the text. Grammar can generate simple respect for the body of work.
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11-24-2011
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zzz
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: WA USA
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All news has bias. Take for example, Fox News. Widely republican, and are therefor biased for republicans. You can't avoid bias. If he were to make it non bias, it would be a boring ass paragraph to read. As for the bias here, it seems like he just took the general or popular opinion on Era. I like this post, and there is a difference between constructive criticism and just being rude. Keep up the good work.
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