Feedback please? Is it good?  

The right end of it is too skinny.  

pretty nice, needs some work.
first peice of art?  

Well I used to make tons of pixel art, but I'm just getting back into graal. I figured I would show off some 10 minute work on here occasionally. Why do I need to change?  

http://preview.turbosquid.com/Preview/2011/02/22__15_54_19/M416%202.pngb33fcdc5-7719-479d-8bac-5c89ef431850Large.jpg (Unsupported image host)
Looks a lil fat on the end.  

I don't think the attachment is very clear, but it has a sort of digital camo, a red dot sight, a fire selector, and some rails  

So heres a good reference pic  

Looks like it's too small (unless the gun is that small in general) and the gun butt is too thin.  

Rails aint that big.  

Posted by Ghettoicedtea

http://preview.turbosquid.com/Preview/2011/02/22__15_54_19/M416%202.pngb33fcdc5-7719-479d-8bac-5c89ef431850Large.jpg (Unsupported image host)
Looks a lil fat on the end.

Should I trim the muzzle by one line of pixels or just trim the top 2 pixels on the end?

Do you all think this would be a good gun for the server?

Posted by Shock

Looks like it's too small (unless the gun is that small in general) and the gun butt is too thin.

Okay, I'll make the stock bigger when I get home  

Stretch out it's length just a little bit. Seems like a little gun, but not as small as your GFX.  

Okay. So should I just model another after it but make it bigger, or should I just use a scale tool? What do I do?

Maybe I should add a foregrip

Also! How do I get the hi-def picture of the gun? I can save the pic from my phone but it is a really crappy image.  

Posted by Ignatius

Okay. So should I just model another after it but make it bigger, or should I just use a scale tool? What do I do?

Maybe I should add a foregrip

Also! How do I get the hi-def picture of the gun? I can save the pic from my phone but it is a really crappy image.

Split it in half with your select tool and fill in the middle. It may take some time to fix everything to your liking. If this feels unnatural then don't change it.  

Okay. I'll keep y'all updated with the new ones once I get home or if I do some mobile drawing.  

Longer!