Will iEra ever have an application for a certain development skill? I'm just curious because I can LAT well.  

Show your skills son ;)  

How does it look?  

I guess. It's kind of bland in my mind, but I don't have all the images that the staffs get when they're working on Era =s...  

I'd say it is a good start just keep practicing. (I'm not that good, haven't made levels in a couple months)  

Not bad. There are just a few tile errors on the trim of the hardwood floor tile.  

I made an outside level too because I figured you would ask for one.  

I oughtta post my stuff!  

Posted by Jonah Walker

How does it look?

I'm not a level expert, but here is what I think.

I like...

• They way you have used the shadowed tiles to shade the floor to light effects. It's a nice little touch.
• You have tiled the floor nicely and it looks like you took your time with it

I don't like...

• The back wall doesn't do your level any justice and stands out too much.
• The random NPC sitying on the vhair is really weird. Not effort has gone into customizing the NPC to look more "Era-ish"
• The plant pot is just lying by its self on the ground. Doesn't look right.

Good try. Keep trying with it. I don't think Era's tileset is the easiest to master.  

Posted by Emera

I'm not a level expert, but here is what I think.

I like...

• They way you have used the shadowed tiles to shade the floor to light effects. It's a nice little touch.
• You have tiled the floor nicely and it looks like you took your time with it

I don't like...

• The back wall doesn't do your level any justice and stands out too much.
• The random NPC sitying on the vhair is really weird. Not effort has gone into customizing the NPC to look more "Era-ish"
• The plant pot is just lying by its self on the ground. Doesn't look right.

Good try. Keep trying with it. I don't think Era's tileset is the easiest to master.

That's not an npc lol. He's using the test feature of level editor, that's his avatar  

Posted by Jonah Walker

How does it look?

I'm not a level expert, but here is what I think.

I like...

• They way you have used the shadowed tiles to shade the floor to light effects. It's a nice little touch.
• You have tiled the floor nicely and it looks like you took your time with it

I don't like...

• The back wall doesn't do your level any justice and stands out too much.
• The random NPC sitying on the vhair is really weird. Not effort has gone into customizing the NPC to look more "Era-ish"
• The plant pot is just lying by its self on the ground. Doesn't look right.

Good try. Keep trying with it. I don't think Era's tileset is the easiest to master.

Posted by Jonah Walker

I made an outside level too because I figured you would ask for one.

I like...

• The way you have detailed the back of the level on the grassy area. Looks well done.
• The building is nicely set out. Doesn't look like it doesn't belong.

I don't like...

• There should be a little more to the level than just grass and flowers. Maybe add a larger parking area and some NPC's. A fire hydrant and a store sign. Just play around with it.

 

Posted by Froggy Krueger

That's not an npc lol. He's using the test feature of level editor, that's his avatar

LOL. Pardon me it looked like an NPC. Makes a little more sense now. Don't disregard the other things I suggested though

Posted by Jonah Walker

Thanks for the advice Emera! D
I've only been leveling with Era's tileset for a couple weeks, so I'm still learning a lot! May I have some advise on my outside level also? Thanks <3.

Added to my first post. Good job.  

They're nice levels but I'm looking for something unique. Try using some tiles what aren't commonly used such as the sewage tiles and experiment a bit. Log on to Era on PC as we use the same images as them. I really like the inside as Emera stated, it has a lovely visual effect!

I'm interested in seeing some more of your material, please don't be shy to try something different My only critique is that you're very limited to what you can use on our tileset so what I've seen so far isn't anything what makes you stand out but I'm looking for your potential.

I'm sure other Administrators will see this, it'll be interesting to see what creative responses they have if any, nevertheless; keep up the good work.  

Posted by WDM

They're nice levels but I'm looking for something unique. Try using some tiles what aren't commonly used such as the sewage tiles and experiment a bit. Log on to Era on PC as we use the same images as them. I really like the inside as Emera stated, it has a lovely visual effect!

I'm interested in seeing some more of your material, please don't be shy to try something different My only critique is that you're very limited to what you can use on our tileset so what I've seen so far isn't anything what makes you stand out but I'm looking for your potential.

I'm sure other Administrators will see this, it'll be interesting to see what creative responses they have if any, nevertheless; keep up the good work.

That's some great advise! I'll be sure to create something unique that'll make me stick out. I'll also keep experimenting with different tiles. Thanks for the advise.  

i like it, just try to improve