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NEWSFLASH | GONDOLA THINGY GETS A UPGRADE |NEWSFLASH
Engineers have been hard at work upgrading the gondola between Delta island and...castle island? A local resident was asked what this would mean for locals. "Well the speed upgrade will make travel faster...travelling between the garden shop and my home would take a long time, i am a keen gardener and having an upgrade makes it much easier." This has also made delays not so much of a problem, due to gondola carts being able to be ran more. It has been stated they have already started to think about the future of travel, many conspiracists think the Graal Underground stations may well be upgraded. The Gnome Jimmeh McCheesebone, whose dad mysteriously disappeared said "Well the fort in snowtown disappeared and that is weird i recon it was an inside job and they are going to add a underground station there...we must revolt against this blasphemy! People died when it eroded and fell into the ice! Ask Fireman Jeffrey! Still many bodies are to be uncovered from it." Our condolences go out to the families of those who died. Now for the sports news: CTF has still yet to open after its year or so closure, but in Spar a person got a 2 win streak. In Footba-soccer the York bandicoots beat the Swamptown greens in a tight battle, 2-1. Weather news up next, over to Chickenana in graal city. "Expect low lying fog and possible SMOG in graal city after an increase in pollution, ghosts are to be expected as well. Do not forget little kids knocking at your doors, ignore them pls." Lastly, Club Crypt is to open its doors once again tomorrow, we asked the owner, Bickenboo to give a statement. "Well it will look the same i think, the admins might put on another crap play like they did ages ago, look out for that one. Be good in later years to make them cringe." Bye bye. |
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Dr. Professor Moderator
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This is how you report something. First of all, use a bigger font for your headline. Also, make your headline more eye-catching. Like so The Gondola Upgrade You Didn't Notice Look at that, easy on the eyes but also eye catching. Secondly, take pride in your facts. Take this statement from your article. "Upgrading the gondola between delta island and... Castle island?" No, not like that. Like this "Engineers have been hard at work upgrading the gondola between Delta Island and the Castle of Graal" See the difference? Be proud and confident with your facts. You have potential, kid. You see the headlines before they drop, now you just need to refine your style. - Former graalporter Areo |
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Understood graalporter veteran. |
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My sword hand twitches!
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But Someguy, what about the elderly? Isn't the gondola cart going to fast? What if they were to fall or get a heart attack? Because last time I checked, graal hospitals are scarce.
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The elderly get heart attacks before they get to the gondola, why? Well because of the amount of pkers around they die from heart attacks after seeing their swords. |
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My sword hand twitches!
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*slaps*
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My sword hand twitches!
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So sad... at least they're resting peacefully at deadwood.
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Hey maybe then should make a graal news team in classic and he's a reporter
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My sword hand twitches!
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