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Join Date: Mar 2012
Location: Lebanon
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Hey Graalians, I am pretty new at LAT only bin training for like 1-2 months... so these past weeks, our beloved XENA and Snake Reckon has pushed me to show Coop or either the World my LAT... So pretty basic im still a noob and you have all the rights to say its terrible, but I said maybe I get some comments that will tell me how to improve? Thanks! these are some few pictures I have many others but I see those are the most weird and terrible I made, so i would like to know what to add and what to remove =D Goin for LAT soon : here are the pics, please dont go too hard on me X.X http://s7.postimage.org/ox0haae2z/i_Eramap1.png (Unsupported image host) outside of a base/house similar to bbz ^ all of them are still missing npc's and imgs since I need to access iEra Dev to get them http://s18.postimage.org/y8pafbs09/i_Eramap2.png (Unsupported image host) http://s7.postimage.org/j3vh6u8qz/i_Eramap3.png (Unsupported image host) http://s18.postimage.org/pk78sjv61/i_Eramap4.png (Unsupported image host) http://s17.postimage.org/hmctqza6n/i_Eramap5.png (Unsupported image host) http://s16.postimage.org/d9ea8mtqt/i_Eramap6.png (Unsupported image host) http://s16.postimage.org/g7fug2qs5/i_Eramap7.png (Unsupported image host) Okay guys! well I know how good work doe Coop since each time I enter a map I see like crazy good things... Well my work is a start I guess Leave a comment please I only send the nw files to Administrator with of course trivia,rush,race,gmap road...Hope you guys can help me! ![]() -Johnaudi Oh also btw, half those maps use era PC tile maps.. others are PS: for the people who cannot see the images, visit those :
Last edited by Johnaudi; 04-24-2012 at 08:26 PM.
Reason: Added images on quote
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zzz
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: WA USA
Posts: 9,232
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I like your mansion. Here's some advice, don't overuse the light because it kinda distracts from the rest of the level
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299,792,458 m/s
Join Date: Mar 2012
Location: Lebanon
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thanks!
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Registered User
Join Date: Mar 2012
Location: AMERICA
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sorry but i cant view ur pictures,,.hope its good^^
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Bazinga
Join Date: Dec 2011
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Great work. Not much to criticise except from your unusual use of shadows. Before adding in darker patches to your flooring you have to decide on where the light source is and take into account of the height of any of the level's objects/furniture/walls. Your third level is the best example of this. There are also a few minor problems, but I doubt having me highlight them will help. I'll message David K to have a look through your work and spot for any problems, it would most probably help. |
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299,792,458 m/s
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Banned
Join Date: Aug 2011
Location: Chicago, IL
Posts: 1,128
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hah, you don't upload an application on the forums, lol
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04-24-2012
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Everlasting love
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: Vman's Bedroom
Posts: 1,128
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04-25-2012
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Banned
Join Date: Aug 2011
Location: Chicago, IL
Posts: 1,128
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No, if you read the title, you will notice it says LAT Form. I'm not criticizing them, i'm simply stating that it is foolish to apply for a position on a forum.
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04-25-2012
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Era Scum
Join Date: Nov 2011
Posts: 2,264
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EXTREMELY WELL DONE
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04-25-2012
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GraalOnline Era PR
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: NY, United States
Posts: 3,131
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I like it, except you used the same flooring for a lot of the levels. I have found many different floor styles, even ones that aren't used as floor tiles. Try to work on that and walls a bit, but i like them. And remember, the level looks odd if it has no back wall.
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Graphics Retard
Join Date: Apr 2012
Posts: 55
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http://s7.postimage.org/ox0haae2z/i_Eramap1.png (Unsupported image host) Fix this, I can see a tile error on the building. |
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Bazinga
Join Date: Dec 2011
Posts: 575
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It is called a tile error <3
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Graphics Retard
Join Date: Apr 2012
Posts: 55
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You happy?
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