Johnaudi's LAT form

Johnaudi · 04-24-2012

Hey Graalians,
I am pretty new at LAT only bin training for like 1-2 months... so these past weeks, our beloved XENA and Snake Reckon has pushed me to show Coop or either the World my LAT...
So pretty basic im still a noob and you have all the rights to say its terrible, but I said maybe I get some comments that will tell me how to improve?
Thanks! these are some few pictures I have many others but I see those are the most weird and terrible I made, so i would like to know what to add and what to remove =D
Goin for LAT soon :
here are the pics, please dont go too hard on me X.X
http://s7.postimage.org/ox0haae2z/i_Eramap1.png (Unsupported image host)
outside of a base/house similar to bbz ^
all of them are still missing npc's and imgs since I need to access iEra Dev to get them
http://s18.postimage.org/y8pafbs09/i_Eramap2.png (Unsupported image host)
http://s7.postimage.org/j3vh6u8qz/i_Eramap3.png (Unsupported image host)
http://s18.postimage.org/pk78sjv61/i_Eramap4.png (Unsupported image host)
http://s17.postimage.org/hmctqza6n/i_Eramap5.png (Unsupported image host)
http://s16.postimage.org/d9ea8mtqt/i_Eramap6.png (Unsupported image host)
http://s16.postimage.org/g7fug2qs5/i_Eramap7.png (Unsupported image host)
Okay guys! well I know how good work doe Coop since each time I enter a map I see like crazy good things... Well my work is a start I guess

Leave a comment please I only send the nw files to Administrator with of course trivia,rush,race,gmap road...
Hope you guys can help me!

-Johnaudi

Oh also btw, half those maps use era PC tile maps.. others are
PS: for the people who cannot see the images, visit those :

http://s18.postimage.org/y8pafbs09/i_Eramap2.png
http://s7.postimage.org/j3vh6u8qz/i_Eramap3.png
http://s18.postimage.org/pk78sjv61/i_Eramap4.png
http://s17.postimage.org/hmctqza6n/i_Eramap5.png
http://s16.postimage.org/d9ea8mtqt/i_Eramap6.png
http://s16.postimage.org/g7fug2qs5/i_Eramap7.png

Jester Lapse · 04-24-2012

I like your mansion. Here's some advice, don't overuse the light because it kinda distracts from the rest of the level

Johnaudi · 04-24-2012

Posted by Jester Lapse

I like your mansion. Here's some advice, don't overuse the light because it kinda distracts from the rest of the level

True :0 I'll try to keep it low

thanks!

Xaldin · 04-24-2012

sorry but i cant view ur pictures,,.hope its good^^

Johnaudi · 04-24-2012

Posted by Xaldin

sorry but i cant view ur pictures,,.hope its good^^

:0 weird why? Try to use another browser or device

Elusive · 04-24-2012

Great work.

Not much to criticise except from your unusual use of shadows. Before adding in darker patches to your flooring you have to decide on where the light source is and take into account of the height of any of the level's objects/furniture/walls. Your third level is the best example of this. There are also a few minor problems, but I doubt having me highlight them will help.

I'll message David K to have a look through your work and spot for any problems, it would most probably help.

Johnaudi · 04-24-2012

Posted by Elusive

Great work.

Not much to criticise except from your unusual use of shadows. Before adding in darker patches to your flooring you have to decide on where the light source is and take into account of the height of any of the level's objects/furniture/walls. Your third level is the best example of this. There are also a few minor problems, but I doubt having me highlight them will help.

I'll message David K to have a look through your work and spot for any problems, it would most probably help.

Thanks!

DarkKnight · 04-24-2012

hah, you don't upload an application on the forums, lol

HomoPanda · 04-24-2012

Posted by DarkKnight

hah, you don't upload an application on the forums, lol

he's showing his work to the community.
many other's have done the same.
you can leave now.

great work!

DarkKnight · 04-25-2012

No, if you read the title, you will notice it says LAT Form. I'm not criticizing them, i'm simply stating that it is foolish to apply for a position on a forum.

Era News · 04-25-2012

EXTREMELY WELL DONE

MSM · 04-25-2012

I like it, except you used the same flooring for a lot of the levels. I have found many different floor styles, even ones that aren't used as floor tiles. Try to work on that and walls a bit, but i like them. And remember, the level looks odd if it has no back wall.

Xian · 04-25-2012

http://s7.postimage.org/ox0haae2z/i_Eramap1.png (Unsupported image host)

Fix this, I can see a tile error on the building.

Elusive · 04-25-2012

It is called a tile error <3

Xian · 04-25-2012

You happy?

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Jester Lapse zzz Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: WA USA Posts: 9,232	I like your mansion. Here's some advice, don't overuse the light because it kinda distracts from the rest of the level

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Xaldin Registered User Join Date: Mar 2012 Location: AMERICA Posts: 364	sorry but i cant view ur pictures,,.hope its good^^

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Elusive Bazinga Join Date: Dec 2011 Posts: 575	Great work. Not much to criticise except from your unusual use of shadows. Before adding in darker patches to your flooring you have to decide on where the light source is and take into account of the height of any of the level's objects/furniture/walls. Your third level is the best example of this. There are also a few minor problems, but I doubt having me highlight them will help. I'll message David K to have a look through your work and spot for any problems, it would most probably help.

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DarkKnight Banned Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: Chicago, IL Posts: 1,128	hah, you don't upload an application on the forums, lol

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DarkKnight Banned Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: Chicago, IL Posts: 1,128	No, if you read the title, you will notice it says LAT Form. I'm not criticizing them, i'm simply stating that it is foolish to apply for a position on a forum.

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Era News Era Scum Join Date: Nov 2011 Posts: 2,264	EXTREMELY WELL DONE

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MSM GraalOnline Era PR Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: NY, United States Posts: 3,131	I like it, except you used the same flooring for a lot of the levels. I have found many different floor styles, even ones that aren't used as floor tiles. Try to work on that and walls a bit, but i like them. And remember, the level looks odd if it has no back wall.

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Xian Graphics Retard Join Date: Apr 2012 Posts: 55	http://s7.postimage.org/ox0haae2z/i_Eramap1.png (Unsupported image host) Fix this, I can see a tile error on the building.