Zinc level pic
 

Attachment 4506 well here is a pic of my level work i just finished. like i said i want to get good. so please give me every advice you got ;) thank you.

http://www.graalians.com/forums/atta...achmentid=4506

Well, the creativity is there, and that is good.

However, I do have things that I don't like.

• You've used far too many NPCs.
  I think that NPCs are good and all, but too many makes a level cluttered. You have a random opened chest in the middle of the grass!

• Your beach is too straight.
  You've started with making it more random and more realistic, but not yet

• While I'm not going to edit the image to point them out, you have several tile errors.
  Examples include: The cliffs in the top-right, the grass>water area in the top right... The are more, of course.

Generally things could just be a whole lot more realistically shaped, something which I have trouble with, and using less NPCs, and not placing blocking and useless objects all over the grass.

I don't know anything about leveling but. I would love to have this as guild house. I like those apple trees along with the boat thing down there. I can't stop looking at it. It's impressive to see. Oh my

kiwi you have no idea how much your imput means... thank you so much i will edit the level as asked then i will create a inside level. thank you so much for the advice

I'll contribute. You've cluttered your rocks too much, therefore diminishing the effect they're meant to have. Keep them rare and they'll give out a more powerful effect on your level. Apply this for both water and dirt stones.

Your grass doesn't work either, it's just random patches and that doesn't really make any sense. It's the same case with your chest, the placement of it is just silly.

Other then that, I enjoy your flare of creativity evident in the level. Well done.

Boat is kinda ugly, along with apple trees IMO
But for a level artist i've never heard of i am generally impressed.

River is too straight in top right!

thank you all for the feedback means alot

You've convinced not to give anymore feedback ever, good job mang.

Interesting that, while your feedback was the best, it was you he ignored xD.

This is old, but keep the NPC's at the minimum. Practice with cliffs more, using different styles of cliffs always helps. Work on that beach, make is curvy. No one likes a straight beach (No pun intended). Try not to put so many rocks in your dirt paths and such. The house looks randomized. Also, the apples don't work for me, not only are they too bright, but you used them too much. Try to improve your overall cliffing and use of water tiles.

I am no longer leveling on classic i am 10x better with era tileset and my level look better