This is the first graphic I've made on the computer. A Yellow Crayon. Behold in its yellowness. I just made this for fun, because that's what I do. I'd appreciate some feedback. Thanks!  

Posted by Dude1310

This is the first graphic I've made on the computer. A Yellow Crayon. Behold in its yellowness. I just made this for fun, because that's what I do. I'd appreciate some feedback. Thanks!

I could stab someone with that crayon. :]
Perhaps round the end a little?  

Posted by Kavan

I could stab someone with that crayon. :]
Perhaps round the end a little?

Yeah crayons always have a sort of rounded point to them.  

Posted by Kavan

I could stab someone with that crayon. :]
Perhaps round the end a little?

Mine's meant for stabbing *wink* *wink*
But I understand. I forgot about the rounded tips for crayons. I'll change that. Thanks!

Posted by NCJohn

Yeah crayons always have a sort of rounded point to them.

I'll change that, thanks.  

this is a pointless detail but crayons say crayon not their color >  

Looks more like a pencil than a crayon. You need more detail on it too because it doesn't look like a real crayon.  

Posted by Sharp Serenity

this is a pointless detail but crayons say crayon not their color >

D:<

Posted by DragonRider

Looks more like a pencil than a crayon. You need more detail on it too because it doesn't look like a real crayon.

like what detail do I need?  

Pick up a real crayon and compare it. If you still don't see it, post here.